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by GrizzlyTeddyBear

schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What's going to happen in the building? Great chapter!! I can't wait to read more!! Please hurry with the next chapter!! :)
person Ian Sarver
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy. Danger comes to the couple...I wonder if the spy has sent assassins after her or something? Just a rhetorical thought in my head and I promise that I am not asking you to give anything away. The story is great and the part where she was taken by Shino to the top of the Hokage Monument was so beautiful. This is so cool and the way Paige is so vunerable but tough is awesome as well 10000 out of 10 stars for you. Keep up the good work.
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahh! Steamy goodness and then a cliff hanger! I hope chapter 20 comes soon! Updates to this story always makes my day! I really do enjoy it that much.
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating! You are my hero. Stop worrying about being believable, you obviously have good instincts, go with them. Please don't kill of any of the rookie 9, that will make me cry.
person eva24
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes IC XD. So glad that I caught this update ^____^ Way to balance the smex with the fluff. Thanks for the reply *Happyhappy* It seems that Paiges gifts are growing or at the very least her skills are. Yay!! Keep going.
person kimahrigirl
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter!! The poll on Shino's IC/OCness...well, I love that he is more open but you are going to have to have more scenes of him being in character to balance out that wonderful intimacy that is sadly OC lol And you make him just wonderful when he is being more open, btw. Yay for future mass deaths! *cough*I mean, something big is about to happen! yay! Bring on the angst! And Gaara! *cough* I mean...more characters we all know and love! (I hope)
person Kilrath
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you know i've thought about this a little bit and decided that you can't really tell if shino is OC or not. Think about it a little bit, when have we ever seen shino in a relationship in the manga?

oh well good chapter
person eva24
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How the hell did I miss this update? *sulks in a corner* It was so sweet. Fluff and groundwork, a good combination. what is exactly going on with Tami-chan? Why would the Ravens follow her if they had no messages that they wished to convey. Hmmmm, Well you've set her up for a reappearance so I'll just trust you. : ) Just wondering, maybe I missed it but was Shino wearing a jacket or was he exposed in all his aburame glory (that sounds so wrong, but you know what I mean) Nice coat.......Hmmmif anyone knew coats it would be that clan, I wouldn't besurprised if they dabbled in a coatmaking business fashion and function ^_^
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
They're so sweet together! I'm really loving the progress between Paige and Shino and how she almost opens him up in a way we don't get to see in the manga/anime. I can't wait for the next few chapters!
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I must admit you have had me on the edge of my seat yet again. Please, continue the great story, I want to know what happens next.