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by GrizzlyTeddyBear

person jewel
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whatevers happening, I wish you luck. If things get bad follow my aunt's advice. Take a deep breath and count to 10, 50 and then 100. If that doen't work find something that makes a lot of noise when you break it while screaming at the top of you lungs. Sounds so stupid but it works wonders for when life and love suck beyond belief. I will try to wait patiently for the next chapter.
person kimahrigirl
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay for another great chapter! Not much happened but still I was sucked in lol I loved the end with Shino and Shibi! That was great! News on my authoress?! Of course I'd love to hear what's going on with you! Moving? That's stressful...I wish you the best! If you need to take a little longer to post, do so. It just means I'd have to sift through the other fanfic fodder for something worth my time. No biggy. I'll constantly keep an eye out for the next chapter none-the-less ;)
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the sweet update, you have to give them kids someday, adopted or whatever. Hope things turn out alright on your side. Know that one of the lights in my sob story life is your updates, see my blog if you're interested. Good luck, keep well.
person DRK04
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! I love it its was very....well hell it was downright fucking AMAZING!!! update soon.
person Ian Sarver
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is wow....This is one of the best Naruto Fanfictions of any kind that I have read in months. Paige is such a cool character and always willing to be a friend to all the people that she knows but I also like the vunerability that she shows in chapter 17. I always liked characters like that, not ones that are all powerful and can kill a jounin by blinking their eyes or something. I mean she is tough as she showed in chapter 12 when she kicked the door down but she has a human touch to her that I don't often see in fanfics. Great job and I will be looking forward to the rest.
schedule July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Heya I know I emailed you yesterday before reviewing... this story is amazing and I cannot wait till the next chapter is posted up. Very few write Shino stories and even those few that do write them do not portray him very well. The way you portray him is amazing. You keep his stoic, enigmatic, quiet personality while expanding upon his own romance life very nicely. I love how you can mix his public life and personal life well so that they run hand in hand and not over take one or the other. Your original character Paige is amazing as well. You portray her beautifully as well, keeping her independant and strong yet when the time calls for it, weak but not to the point that she is one of those mary sues that are always needing rescuing.

Keep up the wonderful work and hope to read another update soon... and I'll be waiting on baited breath as well.

Jadedkatrina
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter!! I can't wait to read more!! Please hurry with the next chapter!!
person eva24
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
We are trusted. The honour, It's too much *sniff* But look how far it's come. You're approaching twenty submissions of chapters. It really is such an accomplishment. So many writers start out well but tend to abandon their fics altogether. It really is great that you have such commitment to your muse XD Keep going, We're all behind you, Cookies for all XD
person kimahrigirl
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay for angsty goodness and fabulous flashbacks! Not to mention wonderful fluffiness. You never cease to give me what I want from this story! And I think you are the first authoress to ever actually answer the remarks I've given...YAY! That clinches it, I'm your loyal minion. I eagerly await the next chapter!
person KilrathSluzath
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
another excelent chapter, keep up the writing