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by GrizzlyTeddyBear

person DRK04
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good does not cover this story its amazing i want to read it over and over again
person DRK04
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoying this story its very good
person Paintedbutterfly
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
One word for this chapter from me... Woohoo!
person eva24
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful work and some adorable fluff. Yeah, Shino seems pretty much IC.I told you before, think how much we get to see of him in the series, I think that you're working pretty well with what you got. Don't worry about slowing updates, Believe me when I say that I'm pretty sure that everyone can understand work commitments. Just don't abandon your story and all will be well ^______^
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wub you. Really. I reread this last night and went to bed with a sigh and then this morning there it is: chapter 15 all sweet and nice and sad. Thank you, now things can get really interesting.
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!! Poor Pagie!! Please hurry with the next chapter!! I can't wait to read more!! Please hurry with the next chapter!! :)
person Kilrath
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this was another well written chapter and i like the way this story is continuing to develop, keep up the awsome work.
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another extremely well done chapter. You beat me to the first kiss scene! Mine's coming in the next chapter of The Code. I think you handled the scene very well... and you achieved what you set out for as far as how the characters acted. Keep it up!

-Casa
person Onitsu Blackfeather
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Only 14 chapters?! But you must post MORE! I'm really liking this fic, I've been reading it while at work on my phone and it's truely the highlight of my day. Please add more!
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I took so long, I went away for a week. Greatness!!!!! Not OOC! Shino does tend to get right to the point doesn't he. I don't know enough about Danzo to voice an opinion. Still loving this fic, can't wait for the next chapter. Thank you.