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by GrizzlyTeddyBear

person Luciana
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
SEQUEL, SEQUEL, SEQUEL, SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!! Please?
person zeroharm
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it is hard to believe that it has been a year already... not much to say other that it has been a fun ride! will be keeping an eye out for anything else you might think up, or I am sure casahouse will be dropping a note in "the code" if you do. Much appreciation from a grateful reader.
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOO! How could you leave us with a cliff-hanger like that? "Would she be larva or a cub?" indeed...

As a side note I would like to read more about Paige. Hell, I'd like to read more of anything you would make with this quality...

I have found few authors who could pull me into a story in such a complete and demanding way, professional or other wise. continue on, and may your journey have many resting spots amongst your adventures.

Alexa Ebonscathe
person MrsCake
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Paige and Shino are gonna be parents! Sweet! If your busy schedule does allow you some free time, a sequel would be great fun to read. A great ending for a great story! Gratz!
person oohshiny
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
KYAAAAAAAA~! your first story was a fcking....um.... what's a more extreme word for success? like.......SUCCESS? uh... anyway......YA!!! WOOT!!! if you decide to do another superb 'experiment', you sure as hell know where to find me! ~^^~
person Auric
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great ending, but now I have a problem. there seems to be a dearth of Well Written stories on AFF.net and an overabundance of Xeroxed Yaoi Shlock that buries the few good stories. I'd beg you to keep writing, but if you're going to write more you will, and if you aren't, no amount of begging will get you to. So, for the record I'll just say Thank you for sharing your tale and good luck in future endeavors.

In Appreciation
Auric
person HumanInfiltrator
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It has been quite the journey. Thank you for it and the happy ending. Can't wait to see where you take us next.
person kimahrigirl
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay for happy endings! Definitely drop me a line when you start something new!
person echolock
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good ending. But she's pregnant?! Holy crapola! Awesome!

Anyways, a wonderful ending to an amazingly well written story. Congrats, and good luck with future stories! If you do write more here, drop me a line and tell me!

-Congrats!
-Alex
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story, from beginning to end, has been fantastic. I learned some interesting things about Native American religion too. I love learning new things. I will be looking forward to whatever story you write next. Although I would like to know how Paige and Shino lead the Aburame clan and how their child or children grow grow. Thanks for the wonderful story.