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I love your story.. though this time there one sentence that was confusing
“Not that that leaves much that I can’t do.” <<<
I would suggest " Thats doesn't leave much I can't do does it." Instead of having 2 thats in a row.

Hey there, just wondering if your going to back away from all the Totem reading and develop the main characters in other ways? Your centering an lot on that.

I wanted to say you're doing an awesome job with this story! normally I'm not a fan of OCs, but I really like Paige and I love the interaction between her and Shino! I check this story daily for updates so I can see what will happen next. Great story so far, I'm anxious to read more!

This is a great chapter!! I think you are doing a great job with Shino!! Your right they don't show what he's like in privet(sp?) and not much in public either. Well I'm done with my commentary, I can't wait to read more!! Please hurry with the next chapter!! Oh also I would like to say most of the time I can't stand stories that have OC's in them exspecilily(sp?) when they are a romantic intrest but you are doing a great job with Pagie and I just love her character!! I can't wait for the next chapter!! :)

*clapping wildly and jumping up and down*

I love you, I love this fic and I love Shino! I like that he is so quiet and reserved yet strong and kind. I think you are right, its nice to imagine what he would be like. Thank you for the quick update, do so again soon.

I like OC stories.. they can be so refreshing and bring something new to the table, at least I think anyways, and yours is doing a very good job at keeping me coming back for more. I keep checking for updates even though I only found this story two days ago heh heh.

I'm not obsessive....Am I? Heh, I know that I make a point of checking once a day because Aff.net lacks the convenience of update alerts that FF.net has. Hee, great stuff as always, keep up your excellent standard. Ah, Shino and his sexy voice XD and a striptease Ha, I like the way paige thinks ;)

Shino!!! You have him down perfectly. Thank you for updating so soon. Do so again, soon.

Tall, Dark and mysterious with a voice like sex. Hmmmmmm Sounds about right XD *hurls compliments and praise* Hooray for Shino, and oh my, what is this? It is *gasp* IN CHARACTER WRITING *shock* Not that you can't go outside of that but it's always nice to see the character properly established first ;)
Well done on your synopsis of the wheel, It was extremely interesting and you paced it remarkably well. I went in knowing next to nothing and you managed to draw me into it. I can honestly count on one hand the amount of fanfic writers that work as hard as you (so don't overstretch yourself. put your feet up with some cake and herbal tea, delicious and healthy XD -ROFL )

This was a great chapter!! I can't wait to read more!! Please hurry with the next chapter!! :)