rate_review Reviews

This story is amazing. I cant wait to see what happens next. Please update ASAP.

Yippeee! Another puhlease.

But I want to see little Shino babies running around. Maybe some Sakuara healing later on? Something that this world missed? Think about it, Please. Thanks for updating.

oh nice way to introduce the idea of shino! i love it and it keeps getting better. you are truly gifted, don't let this gift die, keep writing!
on a side note i tried to review last chapter but it kept losing my post until i gave up...stpiud finicky internet :)
Lady S

A previous review you received mentioned your story having a flow. At this stage, I have become entirely convinced of this. Unlike some other writers you avoid inconsistencies and disjointing the story when you cut to a new chapter. you consistently prove your story to be well researched but you avoid bogging it down in theoretical interpretation and boring the reader. ^_^ good going. I laughed at her reaction to Gai, as much as I love him, any normal person would freak out when confronted with that XD curse your teasing ways, both exciting and infuriating us *hee* but we love you regardless, Roll on The entrance of team 8, O_O wonder what Paige will make of Kiba, never mind Shino.

I truly love your approach to this and I'm researching animal totems now, I bought Animal Speak a while ago but haven't read it yet. I'll go read it right now. ;P

Shino is the heir of the family. He will need to have a child to become the next head of the family. Paige can not have children. A relation ship with her would be highly looked down upon once this information gets out. How do you plan to work this out? Thanks for updating.

Is it real? *Pokes with stick* yeah, it seems so XD Keep going. (and as for taunting us with Shino..
..., you cruel, cruel tease )

Swimmingly? Oh, my that was funny.

Thank you for updating, still enjoying this thoroughly.

Great story so far i love it hurry and keep posting this story