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by GrizzlyTeddyBear

person oohshiny
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
KYAAAAAAAA XDDDD I LUUUUURVE THE ENDING!!!! IT MAKE ME CRY X33333 its SOOOOO SWEEEEEET ;D i can't wait for the epilogue!!! write it as fast as possible kay?? cuz you are fcking AWESOME!!!!
person echolock
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I look forward to the epilogue! Good story.
person MrsCake
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter! Shino is definitely worth the risk. Not to mention that gift was a doozy! :-)
person Dynamo
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*twitch*THE...*twitch*END...THE END?! OMG WTF NOOOOOOO! I WANT MORE!MORE I SAY!
anyways you did a great job, cant wait for the epilogue. although i realy didnt expect the end to some so soon *sob*
person MsMina
schedule December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry. I haven't reviewed in a while. Life has been crazy. And, wow, you have been busy. I couldn't remember where I stopped at exactly so I reread from the beginning. What a treat. Everything flows so well. I was moved with everything all over again - arrival, meetings, plans, Shino (very nice. And I think I wrote before that I have a new appreciation for Shino. If so I had to repeat it.), events in Sand, abduction, and escape. It was a delight. I almost can't wait to see what happens next. If help arrives soon enough ;)? How Shino deals with the bug in amber promise of marriage/love? How things settle down for everyone? But the otherside is I don't want the story to end, and I think that tells more than anything how well crafted this story is. So I guess the best way to put things is I look forward to future installments, but take your time to get them right. We can stand the wait (barely).

-- Oh, on a grammer note, I noticed "rights" instead of "writes" when Naruto discusses Ero-sensi's books in chapter 5. Hope that helps with any revisions being made.
person oohshiny
schedule December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ne, you havent updated in quite a while. are you dead by any chance? plz return to your faithful readers TT^TT
person eva24
schedule December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kagi is terrifying in so many ways..... Well it has been a while hasn't it? Clearly I had to take a trip to find a decent place to read it ^^;; The way the raven speaks... is really, really creepy. I have shivers XD How appropriate, It's APT!!!! Apt, I say ;) There was a real sense of fear and urgency in this chapter, not to mention the apprehension of those gone to fight on their behalf. Eeeeeeee I'm all excited (again) Enjoy life (eheh) but don't ever forget your oh-so-wonderful fic <3 (Reviewer scurries off to catch up on several months worth of stories)
person Aoekae
schedule December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are officially awesome. Write more!
person vilekyle
schedule December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
one word "brillient". it took me a little while to reed but i thourghly enjoyed it and i hope to read even more.
person mary
schedule December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please grizzly i NEED more!!! please??