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Oh yes, a VERY satisfying ending to Masa! And the first thing I thought about Kagi Taka was "Yoda?", but wasn't sure. Looking forward to the next chap! :-)

It has taken me several days to read this story, and so far it has been more than worth the time. I am enjoying this story immensely. Your story is the only one I have seen like this. I love how the Naruto characters are portrayed. All older, some have mellowed with age (Naruto), some have become stronger and more outspoken (Hinata), one has become more "vibrant" (Lee) and others who have learned the hard lessons in life and have come back to what is important (Sasuke). I love Paige. She is strong, but has her weaknesses. You have not made her to be an overly strong or dramatic character. She is human. I did my share of laughing and crying in this story. This story, for me, rates up there with Across the Ages by inuyoukai8 (one of my most faorites) and Tales From the House of the Moon by Resmiranda. I am looking forward to your next chapter.

the revenge was awesome!!!! please some more soon!!

holy crizzap! i have been away too long..come back to find 15 new chapters....as always you take my breath away girl. know i'm still reading and ejoying..although lagging behind due to that pesky thing called life.

lets see torture,burrowing beetles,bears and bastards..as well as a yoda-fied bird....yep, i think we have all the components of a kick ass story here :P however you have ever ruined my ability to write OC fics as a result of your awesomness..i write then read it and go "oh this is crap compared to Grizzly's stuff" and into data heaven it goes..lol. you best hurry up with the new chapter since now that i am caught up i'm dying to know what happens next!

all my luv to you. drop me a line anytime girl, my metaphorical door is always open!

Ha. Excellent chapter (but no Shino! Damn it...) yet again, and yay! You're back!

Sorry. Anon review was mine.

good.. if you hadn't killed masa, or had killed shino, the story would've ended and there'd be many a furious reader, me included. but THANK YOU for destroying masa instead of killing him, otherwise he'd've tortured ppl in the afterlife too.... grr.

The funny thing here is that I fell for an illusion. I am talking about the scene with Paige and seeing "Shino" die in front of her. I fell for it and I have to say that was one of the awesomest moments in ths story. The way you described Shino getting himself killed made me see red for real. but then when you said in this chapter that it was all an illusion made me feel stupid. Don't get me wrong, that was a good thing.LOL I should have known that you wouldn't kill off Paige's love interest at all. 10/10 for this chapter.

The funny thing here is that I fell for an illusion. I am talking about the scene with Paige and seeing "Shino" die in front of her. I fell for it and I have to say that was one of the awesomest moments in ths story. The way you described Shino getting himself killed made me see red for real. but then when you said in this chapter that it was all an illusion made me feel stupid. Don't get me wrong, that was a good thing.LOL I should have known that you wouldn't kill off Paige's love interest at all. 10/10 for this chapter.

EDIT-Forgot to put my name and in email in the last review...^^; Gomen.

NNNOOOOOOO! After such a long time you leave us with another cliff-hanger? The chapter was great as usual, but I can't wait to read the next... it seems like a lot of authors I like just took a few weaks break and just now came back... now if casa and dim song would update all would be right with the world :-)