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by GrizzlyTeddyBear

person wastelandsofthemind
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent chapter, I must say. I love Kanuro in this story. He makes me laugh.
person Ian Sarver
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, Phoenix Downs will do that for ya. LOL I may need another one from the awesomness of this chapter. Paige kicks ass as usual and Shino is ever romantic. I think that you are a good author and have made me a fan. Not many authors here know how to write a story as deep and involved as this one. Mainly it is all about sex, which as a guy I don't mind so much but they don't hold my interest like this one. You have created a real original character with Paige. She is more human than other OCs that I have seen and that is saying alot. She is smart, emotional, a tease(I love the look on Shino's face when she teases him) and awesome(As if you didn't know that from my previous review.XD) But all kidding aside Paige is a character that I can cry with, laugh along with, feel sad and worried with. That is rare and it is an awesome(there's that word again. LOL) thing that you did with Paige. 100000000000000/10 stars always.

Ian Sarver
PS just so you know I may just go with Ian as the Name when I review the next chapter but it will be me in all of my weird and strange glory.
person Ox King
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapters. I love how the relationship is moving. I like how she handled Garra. This is getting so good. Thanks for your update.
person zeroharm
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lovely chapter as always... makes you fell sorry for the poor guards though... ninja duty just doesn't prepare you for certain things :-)
person eva24
schedule September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Super-Paige!!! *Dadadadaadada* XD That's our utterly awesome girl for ya!! Yeah, I really have absolutely no idea as to villains. I am SO disappointed in myself, usually I'm quite good as figuring it out. :( I guess that I'll just have to wait for the update for Paige to don her cand boots and stride into battle (Maybe it's just me but that seems kinda kinky XD I bet Shino'd enjoy that. It has just as much material as an Aburame coat but it's so revealing :D) Lovely characteristion of Kankuro (Kittttyyyyyyyy, it's just too appropriate) and Gaara (I read him as serious and contemplative but calm verging on the laid back and lo and behold look how you write him. A man with the burden of responisbility, the perfect charaacter to empathise with Paiges' duty) and as for Casahouse, I did review after the puppydogeyes XD just hold them off and I'll continue to do so-ROFL
But one more thing-Shinobi Endurance. Thank You. Hardly anyone thinks about that and it is most important, most important indeed.
person Onitsu
schedule September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This was AWSOME! And I really am enjoying the pagan tones with the medicine wheel workings. I'm actualy trying to construct one for myself. Though I already know my toten is a Deer. But anyhoo your Shino Smexiness is just superb. I actualy got butterflies in my tummy reading your steamy scenes. Hes SO romantic in his sentiments its SO cute! Keep it coming! Oh and good job with Gaara and Kankuro. And you should know that Temari has an animal summon of a Ferret or weasel, I cant tell which. :p
person Ian Sarver
schedule September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
One word for this review...
Awesome!
(So that was more than one but there you go.)
person eva24
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more Gaara huh? That's always good. ^__^ Things are progressing nicely, you style and characters are consistent and as for the Gaara mellowing thing, hell it is canon so you cannot be challenged on that. Hmmm, I wonder where you're going with this now *broooood* hah, keep going, keep going Now that Gaara is in it, I 'm not quite sure how it could get better <3
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love Gaara, THANK YOU!
person kimahrigirl
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good Chapter! Gaara was wonderful and I look forward to more of him! I like that Paige is affected by her surroundings as she is too, that was interesting. I took your suggestion and read The Code and am thoroughly hooked. I shall be one to constantly bother CasaHouse to update now as well. Thanks for that recommendation! And, as always, I look forward to the next chapter!