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September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the most interesting stories I've read in a long time. Paige is an absolute doll of an OC and the Naruto cast is very well portrayed. The descriptions of the totems and the tools she uses are just enough without going overboard. I think I could very easily fall in love with your Shino. I'm going to follow this story to it's end. You have a new follower my dear!
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September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! an update and groundwork. So important in writing XD Plus Super-Paige power up (Woot!!) Keep going, keep going ^__^
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September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Shino and Paige are so great together! I was impressed with her powers as well. Yay for some fighting strength! And Yay for Gaara coming soon! I can't wait to see how you write him and what his reading will be and what he thinks of Paige and her powers. Keep up the awesome work!
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September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Its awesome that she has found her own way of combating with the shinobi and varying jutsus! I really like that you implemented that! Mwahaha.. more steamy scenes between the two of them. I can't wait for her to meet Kankurou and Gaara...and see how they react to her! Beautiful story as always!
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September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
fun chapter as always grizzly... I would write more, but you already know how much you kick ass, so I will instead direct my efforts to annoying casahouse. If he makes us wait for 5 weeks again I will have to cry :-(
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September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
'wub you! Hope you are doing ok. I'm fine. Decided to go to Japan for a year. New start and all that. Sorry about not getting back to you sooner. I've lost access to my blog. Just another loss, hey?
Good luck and keep on writing.
Good luck and keep on writing.
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September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...Just Wow. Now I find out that Shino isn't the only one that can kick @$$ though I know that she doesn't want to kill. Of course I always thought that Paige could kick @$$ but to use her totem of the Grizzly to do that and to hold back when she knew it was a training exercise...TOO COOL!!! d^_^b GO PAIGE!!!!! And she is romantic, just like Shino...Way too awesome *Dies overwhelmed by the awesomeness that is Paige.*
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September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You continue to amaze me...
Your talent with words has made it worth the wait for my internet to come back. Well worth the wait.
Your talent with words has made it worth the wait for my internet to come back. Well worth the wait.
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September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
About time! Although I can see why it took so long. But still, woo for them!
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September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, don't I feel loved *blush* and apparently Paige does too XD (that lucky....) Yay for erotica (which is what fanfiction is really about don'cha know *snicker* jokes aside, I'm not sure whether to gush over the sweetness of it all or to go have a cold shower hmmmm........the jury is still out on that decision. Well congrats on managing to slip in some plot development while you were at it XD Yay!! and taunting with teasers ooom, I wanna know what happens next.