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I absolutely adore shikamaru and itachi, and when you make it yaoi..
hello heaven...

I like how your story is going and you write well so its good.

Oh dear...I hope Deidara gets better...damn, the lemons rock! ItaShika cupcakes for you!

I like it. Always nice to find something different to read.
Keep up the excellent work!!

Love the story. Its so good! I really hope you are going to be updating this soon. Amazing writing can't wait to find out what happens next.

Oh my goodness! I have to know what happens next, so I'll just sit here and wait for the next chapter.

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Yuppers, I'll just wait here and re-read Itachi/Shika molestations and marvel at how smart Shika is.

This is damn cool! I love it! Shikamaru in Akatsuki is like my dream come true XD

Nice chapter. Shika is one of my favorite chatacters, and I love how you write him. You stay in character for all of them really well.

mufufufu!! woo! finally i gots to read it! so happy happy happy. ok neway you want to me to review...alright. first off i want to say how i LUVES this chapy to no end. tis not as good as your first chap but nothing is never as good as teh first. plus tis ma fav chap so yesh. ok so now that thats over with my fav part in this chap would prolly have to be when shika is getting his piercings from Deidara but is still making fun of him and getting out at the same time! plus teh ending where it was all just a test for Shikamaru and now is part of teh Akatsuki <3 i luves it all. i love how you portrayed Deidara as a really annoyed, crazy blond Shinobi and how it reminded Shika of Naruto. that and how he got mad bc when he was angery and ranting on about "damn blondes" he had to add except Naruto and Ino >3 alright! dun but if you want more tell me over msn k?

oh and other ppls that read this and havent replied to any of Ner the 2nd's stories do it now!! she wants them but no body is! so do it...do it now!! or teh duck master will hunt you down lol ^-^

Well... I thought it was awesome. Lack of smut showed that you can write plot, and that the story has more to it then just smut, and the hand molestation sated my need for that particular kink. xD Uhm, and and the ending made me curious, update sooooooooooooooon!

I KNEW that was gonna happen. Who is gonna be Shika's partner? This is definantly a story I'm gonna have to keep up with. ^_^