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by DowntownWoman

person blisblop
schedule August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Slick yet fuzzy.Does that make sence?
person XxSasukeNarutoxX
schedule July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dude, I love how you're so... descriptive when your chapters. You're able to write like 6,000 words without the characters not really touching each other. I like that. Can't wait for your next chapter.
person Jan
schedule May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Very interesting and Hot!!!

Please update chapter 3 soon ^_^

Jan
person Jane_Lane
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You must continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was so hot! You have a really awsome writing style too.
schedule April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lovely so far! You're doing great even though I don't usually read this pairing! Keep up the great work, and Go Sasu-kitty!!
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good job!
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes yes yes more please! It would be cruel to leave them hanging. *falls onto knees begging* Excellent story. Sequel plzzz
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello!

I'm a sucker for KakaSasu, and this is one very arousing set-up. I LOVE teasing Kakashi, I ADORE inexperienced, curious Sasuke. The kissing scene was so very hot... Great story.

I do have a few suggestions for you. I don't like leaving criticism in reviews, even if it is constructive... so if you'd like to hear it, please email me: insidethesquall@yahoo.com

Again, I really enjoyed reading this!
schedule May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HOT