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for Control is Everything

by DowntownWoman

person kitty
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is great i hope kiba nd sasuke arnt dead ( i luv sasuke)
schedule August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!this is the best story i have read in a long time!!!! PLEASE!!update soon!!!! i need to no wut happens! this is an awesome story!! keep going you're awesome!!!!!
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story and I alos hope that Sasuke and Kiba will be ok. I really love this story though and it's my kind of stories. I write stories too but I use fanfiction.net. My name on there is Rokugatsu-nin. But anyways I really like this story a lot. Please update soon.
person Inigeshi
schedule June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
really good story line you keep me guessing i was disapointed when i finished chapter 4 and saw no chapter 5. please continue you're doing an excellent job.
person llyoung
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is a really good well thought out and well written story. Please keep writing. Thanks for sharing your talent.
person Yersi Fanel
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Glomps Hinata* AWWW! Hinata-chan!! How did she ended up there? (not like I dislike that anyway, Hinata and Neji are my favorite characters) and NOO Rock Lee!
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*cough* With all that drama you can say that I like this chapter and the whole idea of the story is becoming more interesting form me, un!

See ya.
schedule May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, this caugh my attention, so I want to see what you have in mind.
Nice opening, by the way.