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July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Naruto and Gaara are friends!! ^^
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April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG this is great, I can't wait til the next chapter! When you do add to this, do you think that you could send me an email with the web address to let me know? the email is PotionsPet@hotmail.com
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January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Gaara in the next chapter!!!! ^^ It will be interesting to see him in the company of his father and, I guess, his handlers.
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January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the alternate world you've created. It's darker, dirtier and (do I even have to say it?) sexier, than Kishimoto's original. I look forward to the next chapter.
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January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
the charm and charisma of naruto can be used on anyone except ibiki apparently. i think it's a good call to let gaara have his own chapter it just seems right. although i do question whether he will have the same presonality since his father is already dead and he is the leader of suna but only as a figurehead. i can't wait to see how the next chapter plays out.
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January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i am so happy keep the updates coming so interesting ........sasu/naru is my favorite couple though
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January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was a great chapter. i like how you handled the interogation and the way naruto acted during it. plus it is neat to see how naruto is acting. he is so in character. i know that sometimes ooc is expected but it good sometimes to get a feel of the way the character would act as he was meant to be potrayed in certain situations (i hope you get what i'm saying). i can not wait to see the next chapter.
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January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!!
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January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
with the entrance of ibiki this story has now upped the stakes. i like the boogeyman comment by the way. i really can't wait to see the next chapter now.
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January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love it!!!!!! can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!