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schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
cant wait for the next ch....now would be good
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
poor naruto, i wonder if his teamates are going to visit him at the hospital. i can't wait to find out. i am really looking forward to the next chapter.
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
next ch please
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O M G. I just read all 11 chapters straight...Please oh please update soon.
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This chapter changes everything in the story. It will definitely be much darker from here on in. I commend you. I'm eager to see how the next chapter unfolds. ^^
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice. This Naruto isn't taking any shit from Sasuke. Great new chapter and welcome back! ^^
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thanks for making the effort to do this chapter a month earlier it was worth it. i am still hoping that this wl end with sasuke and naruto. naruto seemsd to be in th pole position with eveybody so my hope springs eternal. i can not wait til the next chapter maybe iruka would have calmed down by then, a stressed naruto makes me sad (although genma and hayate are a good substitute).
schedule January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A very interesting story to say the least! Pretty please update soon!
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schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Is the icon Masaki Sumitani? A.K.A.Razor Ramon Hard Gay?

I love Wikipedia.

I want Naruto to do Sasuke! That would be cool. Naruto can be the seme, Sasuke the Uke!

Make it happen, please! *I crawl on ground, groveling at your feet*

Awesome story, by the way.
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! I LOVE the modified sexy jutsu he used on Ebisu! I laughed hard enough to bust a gut.