rate_review Reviews

Whoa...I just read the whole thing and al i can say is is that you are an awesome writer. I just hope that Jiraiya and the other perverts get sounded out by Iruka (though it was kinda Iruka's fault that Naruto has such warped morals about sex cause he practically forced him to leave) and that I ruka beats their asses. I'm not sure I like the idea of such a loose Naruto, it really doesn't suit him *worried face*..okay all i can do is ask you to UPDATE and see where you go from here. And BTW you still had some mistakes (minor though) in there, even after your beta. Its a lot better than most though! ^^

Iruka is so cruel. :(

And I mean hey, who knew he was Jewish too? He sure has that guilt thing down pat! >:) hehehe

Poor Naruto...over-protective Iruka...

So, does he meet Sasuke, Sai, and Kakashi next chapter? AWESOME!

And, what's that I smell? sniff, sniff

Yes, I defianately smell another update not too far off!

Smells a little like there could be some sexy smuttiness in it too!

JOY!

TRG

SO....You're not going to lwave us hanging like that, right?

You're going to sit down right now and get started on another smut-filled chapter, right?

Good. I thought so.

Wonderful job,
TRG

This story seems original, and, from what I've read so far, I think it deserves a good praise or two. So, here's my praiseful review.

TRG

Chapter 2 review:

Bad Jiraiya. Using the boy...er...girl...birl...like that. Ah, well, Naruto doesn't mind, does he? Onward I read!

Just another praiseful review,
TRG

Praises! Just pure, wonderful praises

This is very entertaining.


I like it. A lot.

Praiseful reviewer,
TRG

This is the kind of AU fic that I simply don't see enough of. It's clearly alternate-Naruto-verse and I simply love it. And the smut is very hot too which is always a huge plus. If you're still looking for a beta I'm more than interested. Email me if you are. manicandyshumway(at)msn(dot)com

holy crap! that really is an ambitious list of smut there!

well, best of luck to you. its been a hell of an entertaining ride so far and surely, the rest will be just as stimulating. 0:) hehehee. ^^