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Chapter 3: Sasuke is such a teme. Naruto is so right. A "fling" does NOT last for a year. A month or two, maybe, but a year. Teme, that's a relationship no matter how you try to color it otherwise. Moving on to chapter 4 now.

Chapter 4: Ha ha! I love you, Kiba. For once, I'm glad Sasuke got his just desserts. Now maybe he'll make up with Naruto and stop being such a teme toward our favorite blond. I doubt he'll stop being a teme but he better make up with Naruto. Moving on to Chapter 5.

Chapter 5: Thank you, Sakura. Sasuke deserved that. And yes, Sasuke, you are indeed jealous. But how dare he try to force himself onto Naruto like that. He can't say the crap he said about their relationship being just a fling and then try to rape Naruto. Sasuke is such a teme I don't know why Naruto keeps suffering over him. Sasuke needs to straighten up or Naruto will leave him because Naruto deserves so much better than a teme. Moving on to Chapter 6.

Chapter 6: Loved the sex scene between Naruto and Sasuke this chapter. It's about time Naruto took the lead and showed Sasuke what love is all about. It's not just a conquest, Sasuke. But, naturally, at the end, Sasuke just keeps trying to screw it all up. *heavy sigh* Great chapter. I wonder what Sasuke's dream is all about, though. Moving on to Chapter 7.

Chapter 7 was amazing. Sasuke's story was so horrific and sad and angry. And even though he may be right that Naruto does deserve better than him, I don't see that stopping Naruto. I know Sasuke has been through A LOT in his young life but he can be loved. He isn't completely emotionless like Sai. Heck, even Sai tries to be less emotionless. (Wait, did that makes sense?) Anyway, Naruto isn't the type to give up easily so I'm sure he will find a way to make Sasuke love him back. He may have to dig really deep inside Sasuke to find it but I'm confident Naruto will succeed in the end. Now, on to Chapter 8.

OH.MY.GOD
Stupid Sasuke, He just realize now?! When Naruto wants to call it off!
Oh my God, you really makes me so-so-so curious about the ending of this story! Would you makes them together? or would you makes them broke up for real? Well, I really hope the first one.
I really love your story. I can't wait for the next chapter :):)

And sorry for my bad grammar:)

It's so saddddd but a very good story :)
I love the relationship between Naruto, Shikamaru, Kiba and Chouji. And I think you're the best writer of SasuNaru fic.
Keep going and sorry for my bad-bad-bad grammar :)

EXCELLENT work!!! I really liked this for sure, and cannot wait until the next chapter!

Sorry to see you have cancer. Gotta be tough. I should know, lost an aunt to it.

On the more silver cloud side of things, you write really well. Can't wait for more. :D

Awesome story here! I just read everything and it was amazing! I am glad that you are slowly recovering from your ordeal, God bless you for that! Can't wait for the next chapter, but take your time!