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by havenoclue

schedule December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AH! How can you end it there!!!!! I have to know what happens next!!!!!!
person inumoon3
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke's such a bastard! But he's Naru's bastard, so Naru better fight for his man!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
DEPRESSING!!
schedule December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM

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Sasuke is such a bastard!
schedule December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Naruto!!! Sasuke deserves to be taught a lesson for breaking Naruto's heart!! Thanks for the new chapter! :)
person kati
schedule December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow this is pretty damn emotional. So... Sasuke doesn't really care about Naruto as a lover, but only lusts after his body? Is that right or is he just emotionally stunted? lol I'm really looku=ing forward to your next update, could you please email me when you post? ---> mypheonixfire@hotmail.com
schedule December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wahhhhhhhh! so sad. *tear*
Cool story can't wait to read more.
=)
person blueh
schedule September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice story! I really enjoyed reading the two chapters. Please keep updating!
schedule September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is so good!! You have me intrigued with wanting to know what will happen. I love how you've written both sides of their feelings and thoughts. :)
schedule September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice, interested to see where this goes. tho i did feel kinda ripped off when 3/4 of that nice lengthy looking chapter was all flashback :(