rate_review Reviews

I loved your take on the relationship between Sasuke and Naruto and cannot wait for you to explore it more through your story. Waiting for the next update! Sorry to hear about the stressful work situation...but have fun all the same!

I would never have guessed by reading this that English was not your first language. (Although maybe I should have, since native English speakers tend to know next to nothing regarding grammar and their original language. Heh.)

This story is really good. I can't wait to find out how this ends and where the insecurities go with the rejection and Sasuke's low sense of self-worth.

Well as far as any grammar or spelling errors there was nothing that leapt out at me making it hard or unpleasant to read your chapter so don't worry too much on that issue, okay? A beta is always nice to have and I'm sure one of AFF's talented ones could help and find things to improve it but as it stands you did well. Obviously from the hints you left there is a miscommunication going on between them or at least Sasuke is holding himself back from giving everything to their relationship. The reason they would have this much and not more is a question I look forward to you answering. Also is this following the anime/manga and if so how far? What I mean is did Sasuke go to Orochimaru and all that? Well, hope you'll stay with it would love to see more from you. Thanks for posting, take care.

Hmmmm. This feels somewhat familiar. Don't worry though, it is still interessting and you can go so many places whith it. Please do.

wow!!! so cool continue!

awwww sasuke no cuddle....i liked it...don't give up okay! write more! Sasuke must be made to cuddle damnit!

Wow! What a way to start off a fic! I like it so far indeed *nods head*. Very descriptive and titillating. I wonder what the story is further about so pls do update soon!

P.S. If you don't find a BETA, i'd give it a shot for you, np.

This is a good start. I can't wait to find out why Sasuke feels that he doesn't deserve to be cuddling with Naruto.

Nice lemon and nice beginning of what could be a cool exploration of Sasuke's psyche via his relationship with Naruto.

Great~!

Erm...I'd like to be your beta if you wish, but I can't see your e-mail. -_-; It's a good start by-the-way, it seems like it will be a good story.