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Neji as a bad guy is great! That scene with Naruto and Sasuke, though, *drool* was HOT!

Another great chapter!! I love this story so much! Pleaseeeeeeee update soon!!

a very beautiful, very poignant piece. you've done an amazing job with this story thus far and i really can't wait for the next part. like naruto, i'm dying to know what sasuke's past is, what his story is, the truth about the raven-haired man. i'm also interested in knowing a bit more about naruto, about how he learned to be so innocent, to remain unjaded though he had every right to be so.

again, an amazing job thus far and i do hope you'll update this soon.
~hanyou-elf

aww now that's real touching. poor naruto having all that happen to him.

damn! that was just totally hot!! i mean u can really feel the love and passion in there. hehe now naruto is truely a man! lmao!! and sasuke finally found the one thing he's been sort of looking for perhaps? but that was really good! hehe now for the morning after. lol.

I like the way that this stary has started off. I can't wait for the next chapter.

that was so awesome!!!please write more quickly!!