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by Zardra

person hisoka
schedule October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was really cute the ending was so mushy it make me sick with joy,in a good way
person gaara89
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is most definitely one of the best sasu/naru fics i've ever read.
person roro237
schedule October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes! I enjoyed reading this very much. I lol at Itachi trying to take over the world:)(good one!)
schedule October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely love this story!!!!! Great job!!! ;)
schedule October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Meep! Are you the same Zardra who collaborates with Ktiraam?! If you are, GOD I LOVE your work! Especially the ItaSai on HF.*clears throat and tries to look less like a rabid fangirl* Okay on to an actual review and not gushing over fanart. I like this fic, a LOT and I soooo wanna see what Itachi's kids look like. I got tons of warm squishies from the way you tied up all the loose ends in a pretty bow in the last chapter, most of all the loose end of Sasuke returning to Orochimaru's lair and putting his past to rest. This whole fic has been a rollercoaster of emotions and you made the emotions so clear that I could feel them. I hope you plan to do more fics. Thanks for the wondeful read. Sending you hugs, snuggles, and NaruSasu plushies.
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person Trollmia
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohh such a wonderful chapter. Long and sensual with a bit of laughs in it too. You're doing great with this story and I enjoy it every time I read it. It was a bit funny because I was reading it the other day (before the update) and I thought it would be great if you updated it soon - look and behold - you did :)
person biiisti
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
God i just love this story! Amazing work , keep it going! (:
person Dragon7
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Grate chapter!!!! I'm so happy that you are back and writing again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
person despairs
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm happy you updated this because i lost it and i've been looking for it. The new chapter is so beautifully written, it was full of tenderness and silly humor and yummy SasuNaru/NaruSasu moments (by the way, i like how you have them switch seme/uke roles). One of my favorite parts of this chapter was when Naruto declared Sasuke as his lifelong partner to the whole village...so sweet! The one thing that kinda irks me is when Sakura interrupts them...i feel this urge to lock her away whenever she does it...she seriously needs her own man (or woman) so she will leave them two alone. But anyways..great job! I cannot wait to see how this wonderful story will end.
person roro237
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy reading your story:) I lol when the boys got interrupted by Sakura, Kakashi and Jiraiya. Jiraiya asking Naruto about how wild Sasuke was, loved the answer! Of course the smexyness was out standing:) I also like how long your chapters are. It allows me to getting into each chapter and really feel what's going on. Like Sasuke trying to let go of his past and the part where they just need to hold and be held. I think this chapter was super:)