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for Unrequited

by tasukigirl

person Ana
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*squeals loudly* OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG! Those two are soooooooo cute. I think I'm gonna cry. *sniff* stupid Sasuke for not returning Naruto's feelings. Well that doesn't matter now because my cute, loveable, red-headed Gaara will love Naruto. until next time. ^.~
~Ana~
person sainaru
schedule May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
greeeeeeeeat i love it wonderful story too bad it was soo short *pouts* love ya for this though yay gaara and naruto are just tooooo freakng cute
person Sarryn
schedule May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A delicious literary treat to enjoy and savor.
person Anise
schedule May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad Naruto's giving Gaara a chance I think they would make a great couple! As for Sasuke, well he can just go brood in a corner with Neji, besides I've always thought that Naruto and Sasuke make better rivals and friends than a couple (sorry if your a sas/nar fan).
Anyway I hope you do continue this eventually I would love to see how their relationship progresses, plus I've really enjoyed reading this so far it's been well written :)
person katie
schedule May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love your story, your descriptions of gaara's feelings and stuff was very sweet and made me smile. Is this the end? Or is there going to be more chapters, or a sequel? I hope it is not the end cause i love it! xx
person Kaze
schedule May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope you do decide to continue this, I'd love to see where you go with this. You write both Gaara and Naruto very well and I loved your portrayal of Kankuro.
person Anon
schedule May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ahh squeals from the cuteness of it!!please update soon!
person Ariya
schedule May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wooohooo! That was an awesome chapter! All the cuteness! *Squeals* I can't wait to read the next chapter! So please update soon!
person cynaga
schedule May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Lovely. Such a warm relationship depicted between Naruto and Gaara. I just hope this doesn't jar the Uchiha into his senses and end up with Gaara getting hurt (can you tell who I am rooting for?) Smooth, engaging writing. THANKS!
schedule May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you can't stop there. Will it work? How will Sasuke react? Will they fall in love, have love? Is there a future?