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by tasukigirl

person spiritofpez
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good story! Do you think you'll do another chapter? It would be interesting to see how this pans out.
person Anise
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Naruto, can't see what's right in front of him, but then it's not unusual that we want what we can't have. This is another great story even if it was a little sad, I really like the way that you write Naruto and Gaara together whether as friends or more and I can't wait to see more :)
person morris
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really hope this isn’t a sad little one-shot, because I would love to read another chapter.
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So is this a NaruSasu, a SasuNaru, or a NaruGaara?

Update soon.
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me you are going too update this. I love fics where Gaara is a nice guy learning about life, love and everything else. You have also set a great (sad, buy still very well done) mood for this. By the way thank you for the detail discription it makes for great reading pleasure.
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw, nice start, you pique my curiosity so I'm wondering who is Gaara crushing over. It's Naruto isn't it? Well anyway hope you update soon ^^