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by yosinpurun

schedule April 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This was rather interesting. I like Ao. I'm not too sure on his exact character type but he doesn't seem bad? I like how you described his looks. He seems to be very cute~ I have to say some of the sentences were confusing. Like maybe some words that shouldn't have been there were added or were missing words. Maybe read it over one or two more times before posting. The slight lemon wasn't that great but not the worse either.