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by DaLuvInMii

person Ivy
schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far! I'm sure you'll come up with some awesome rules ^_^ Perhaps one should be don't touch anyone except me, since he is a possessive bastard and all ;-) Anyways update soon.
person amazingZ
schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
dont edit yourself and get a beta. seems promising but you have past/ present grammatical issues. it'd be great if you had a beta to edit your stuffs.
person Kathryn Reel
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
its spelled kyuubi. but you were close.^_^
person kunitsu
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooooooh this is interesting although I am still a bit unsure of which Uchiha is Naruto's master and I find Kyuubi interesting and funny already
schedule May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
seems intriguing so far. i can't wait to read more.
person riniuchiha
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good!
person qwerty
schedule February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good story so far.
update
person Anon
schedule February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting.
person Word_Slave
schedule February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please change the ratings on the story to Non-consent and a few of the other tags. this is much more violent than the tags suggest.
Thanks
schedule February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was interesting but well... short.
I can't wait to read more.
=)