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August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hes demonic scary anyone woulda ran for it,he shoulda know something was up when he started counting,and before he got into the limo he could of ran away (i would of)rather die free than live a slave/toy ne.
continue whats he do does he whip him and is he worse than narutos former traner
continue whats he do does he whip him and is he worse than narutos former traner
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July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love it i cant wait for the next chapter
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June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is good, please update soon!
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June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great story ...keep writing. You are a very good writer.
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May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well, there is so many things Naru-chan can do you could have him spill dinner on Teme or if sasuke has gueat *evil smile* you could also have him hiding from the bastard or something of the sort heh heh heh. P.s. love the story can't wait for next review!!!
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May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you've caught my interest that's very hard to loose.i cant think of what he should do except fighting back or running off and meeting some one and going off with them but still ending up going to sasukes school thats when sasuke gets him back...somehow.i dunno,good luck finding something
updates?
updates?
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May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, let's see *looks at to do list*. I think we should make Naruto 'accidentally' drop a steaming cup of tea on Sasuke's you-know-where...just because he's a bastard and that dick of his needs to know that it won't always get what it wants.
-Damp *Please update!*
-Damp *Please update!*
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May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow Sasuke is E-VIL...poor Naruto-kun
lol
I like this story...it's getting good
I can't wait to find out what happens next
especially whenever the lemon comes up
that'll be a nosebleed =P
Keep up the good work
update soon please!!!!!!!!! ^_^^_^^_^^_^
lol
I like this story...it's getting good
I can't wait to find out what happens next
especially whenever the lemon comes up
that'll be a nosebleed =P
Keep up the good work
update soon please!!!!!!!!! ^_^^_^^_^^_^
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May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oohhh.. very nice. as to suggestions for trouble, you could always let him flirt with someone. After all the rules are that he is not to speak unless spoken to and not to allow anyone to touch him... BUT what if someone started talking to him and he started flirting back and HE touched someone? Those aren't (technically) against Sasuke's rules. ^__^ This way Sasuke will have to teach him a lesson and maybe UPDATE his rules a bit. lol
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May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good beginning but I hope it's just a teaser, because it is really short.