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for A New Life

by aliakenobi

schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice, i like where you're going with this. highschool AUs have a tendancy to get boring quickly, but this one isn't so far, there are a lot of things you're keeping back from us, which makes me wonder, which makes me want to read more, which is how a story should function. good show ^.^
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting story and I can't wait to see how the characters relationships develop.
person kai
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it was short but sweet. i liked it keep it up
person Rosebud
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! I can't wait to read more. I hope you can update soon!XD
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Naru-chan but now at the same time YAY! A much better start! but why must sasuke be so mean, do you plan for something to happen to make him a little nicer...sometime in the next few chapters! lol. Loving it and can't wait for the update.
person kaesaku
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooh, goody~
do continue!
^_^
person Dacara
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok, i really liked the story. The way U describe your characters is great and the plot is original (as much as it can be with all those Naruto fanfics- its hard to write something completely new). All in all, loved it! I'm waiting for an update, so please post the new chapter soon.
Love X3
Dacara
person beautifullove348
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww I really like this story! Sasuke is the bastard he usually is and the characters fit perfectly:) I'm finally glad Naruto has a good life. Also can't wait 'till the smexy BL happens:P Please update quickly this story has sparked my interest and now im hooked!
person sethian
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your story is really cute and I love it!! I hope you write more to it soon!!
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I know what it's like not having everything you've ever wanted but it makes you treasure the things you do have. I know how Naruto feels on that aspect. Good story, I can't wait for the next chapter. Ja!