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August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please excuse my language but, Holy dear FUCKING god.
I amost died-that was so fucking sexy. Kya! It was so awsome-the first really good Hardcore yaoi I've read.
I'll keep on reading, no doubt abou that-and I'll be sure to read your other stuff too.
d[-.-]b
the Crimson Eagle.
--better known as Orgy-of-Death.
I amost died-that was so fucking sexy. Kya! It was so awsome-the first really good Hardcore yaoi I've read.
I'll keep on reading, no doubt abou that-and I'll be sure to read your other stuff too.
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the Crimson Eagle.
--better known as Orgy-of-Death.
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August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Once again-oh my fucking god.
*dies*
the Crimson Eagle
--aka Orgy-of-Death.
*dies*
the Crimson Eagle
--aka Orgy-of-Death.
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August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The Crimson Eagle again!
n____________n I guess I don't have to tell you how awsome you are ne? I really loved the somewhat...cute isnt the right word, but Im gonna go with that anyway, cute feel of this chapter.
-the Crimson Eagle
--aka Orgy-of-Death
n____________n I guess I don't have to tell you how awsome you are ne? I really loved the somewhat...cute isnt the right word, but Im gonna go with that anyway, cute feel of this chapter.
-the Crimson Eagle
--aka Orgy-of-Death
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August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wonder how Genma and Raidou decided who got to play who on the tape, something to ponder later ;)
I remember when I read the last chapter I thought, 'I don't want to be a fly on the wall I want to be a Genma in the tree' apparently I was right in assuming that there was no way Genma wouldn't want a look and I really can't believe Iruka actually thought that Genma would have the self control not to look, he must know his friend better than that!
Why oh why can't Kishimoto-san make Naruto movies like that, I don't think I'm going to hold my breath for that to happen, but it was a fun end to the story, really I don't think Iruka had anything to worry about Kakashi got porn staring them-what could be better ^_^
I remember when I read the last chapter I thought, 'I don't want to be a fly on the wall I want to be a Genma in the tree' apparently I was right in assuming that there was no way Genma wouldn't want a look and I really can't believe Iruka actually thought that Genma would have the self control not to look, he must know his friend better than that!
Why oh why can't Kishimoto-san make Naruto movies like that, I don't think I'm going to hold my breath for that to happen, but it was a fun end to the story, really I don't think Iruka had anything to worry about Kakashi got porn staring them-what could be better ^_^
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August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loving the naughtiness!
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August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wish I could get a copy of that tape too (yeah I know we all wish
we had a copy). Thanks for writing.
we had a copy). Thanks for writing.
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August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG... I want a copy of that!!! *sigh* oh well.. in since that is not happening.. thanks for the wonderful story. I hope you have it in your heart to somday do another Iruka and Kakashi tale. Kudos to you *hands you a dozen roses*
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July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my GOD this is hot. Hot and funny and HOOOOT... Dominating Iruka just got me by the short hairs. o.o The whole thing, from striptease to end.... It's that time of the month and I don't need painkillers, you wonderful, wonderful lady. XD
...the testosterone-laden burping contest was so funny I had to share it with who I was talking to on IM. <3
...the testosterone-laden burping contest was so funny I had to share it with who I was talking to on IM. <3
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July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh. my. god. That was soooo good.. so good. wow... *speechless*
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July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
always happy to see that you've updated, especially when you come bearing smut hot enough to melt my brain! *pokes brain puddle with stick*
-and the smut is awesome, so often it seems that sex follows a set formula in fiction, kissing, preparation, sex. now really with these two it's all good but it's nice to see something different and I like that you took your time building up to the sex, makes it even hotter (there's masturbation *fans self*)! i absolutely loved all the teasing and by far the best part was the dirty talk, it was very sexy without coming across as uncaring or demeaning, which i've seen happen.
-Iruka's thoughts about not topping were sad and at the same time seemed almost ridiculous but completely understandable. Kakashi thinking about the baby was just so sweet and understanding, actually all his inner thoughts were wonderful through the whole story. although you get the feeling that if he was left to his own devices he would happily slip off into his own world filled with fantasies-has anyone ever been that happy about stripping!
one day i will learn to curve my rambling and leave you with just a one sentence review, but for now let's just say the whole thing was just steamy enough that you needed a cold shower after reading it and i can't wait to read the next thing you post ;)
-and the smut is awesome, so often it seems that sex follows a set formula in fiction, kissing, preparation, sex. now really with these two it's all good but it's nice to see something different and I like that you took your time building up to the sex, makes it even hotter (there's masturbation *fans self*)! i absolutely loved all the teasing and by far the best part was the dirty talk, it was very sexy without coming across as uncaring or demeaning, which i've seen happen.
-Iruka's thoughts about not topping were sad and at the same time seemed almost ridiculous but completely understandable. Kakashi thinking about the baby was just so sweet and understanding, actually all his inner thoughts were wonderful through the whole story. although you get the feeling that if he was left to his own devices he would happily slip off into his own world filled with fantasies-has anyone ever been that happy about stripping!
one day i will learn to curve my rambling and leave you with just a one sentence review, but for now let's just say the whole thing was just steamy enough that you needed a cold shower after reading it and i can't wait to read the next thing you post ;)