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for 'Plans Of Hebi'

by littleolmee

person blueh
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Definite good! So hot!! Sex in the onsen! *droolz* I love the way Sasuke talks dirty. Hehe.. Keep updating.
person roely
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love your story! hope you update soon!
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aahhh have i told you that i love you???? if i haven't just know that i sooooo do! (creepy as you may find that lol)
person leanne
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like it a great deal. But somehow the love scenes feel very luke warm and controlled, but then Sasuke and Naruto both seem to be virgins in their own seperate way and are both finding the path to passion. At lease Sasuke is starting to seem very passionate for his dobe even though I don't think he's realized what he feels is love for Naruto but then I think that's your plan to keep those secret words like love from their bonding until towards the end and when that happens it will totally be mind blowing for both of them I think. :)

Next chapter please.
person Rosebud
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOw! I loved it!
lol the three of them were watching. That was awesome! ^^
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Man...well Sasuke did the nasty...the reallllllllll nasty lol. Is it just me or is this whole bond thing Sasuke keeps squaking about a bit overrated. I mean it sounds more like fuck buddies to me...after all Sasuke said he still saw Naruto as a dear friend...and they fuck....every-night (hooraw on that part!) but i mean does he feel anything other than that? Does Naruto? If I didn't know any better I'd say Naruto was just doing because he promised he would...cause nine times out of ten he doesn't really wanna. Though...if my butt was getting rammed everything night i'd want a break too...poor lamb...any whore (heh) I enjoyed this chapter and look forward to what comes next..cookie for you!
person ebibi
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This whole fic is *awesome* seriously that Sasuke he's a sly one but from what you wrote it's obvious that they both care for each other. Naruto is so sweet he just loves it when Sasuke pleases him. He's very coy, he tells Sasuke to stop and "it hurts" but really he's egging Sasuke on and I bet sasuke knows this since he's a genious. Those lemon scenes are ¢¾¢¾¢¾ and having team Hebi to witness iy made me laugh I have a feeling Karin will adore Naruto now even dress him up to se another SasuNaru scene.
person eyes0nme19
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it...
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so hot!!! I just love the lemons you write!!! :)
person lilblacknitecat
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! yeaaa! as excepted you once again have deliver a very hot smexy chapter of SasNaru goodness ^0^ I was thinking what kind of new position (pun intended) Naruto would force into but lol this time it's more like a place eh? ^.~ And Karin being a closeted yaoi fan just made me laughed LOL who wouldn't be after witnessing Naruto and Sasuke going at it like rabbits? *faints