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for 'Plans Of Hebi'

by littleolmee

person Crimson Kitsune
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY AND UPDATE! No I don't mind if you hang onto those, by all means go ahead.
person gaara89
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Don't worry! It was worth the wait! I hope you update soon!
person hisoka
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YOU CAN AND CANT CALL THEM EABITIONISTS,THEY DIDNT KNOW THEY HAS COMPANY BUT IT WAS A PUBLIC PLACE WASNT IT.KEEP IT UP IT ONLY GETS BETTER
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I really enjoy reading your fic. It hard to keep Naruto and Sasuke in character but you have done that. Can't wait to read what happens next. Until next time, take care, and god bless.
person Anon
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Those two are going at it like rabbits! Why hasn't the effect of the stuff Karin gave Naruto warn off yet? And what about the Kyuubi? Hurry with the next chapter!!!
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was one great chapter. sasuke is so nasty i am apalled and i loved it. i can't wait to see the next chapter.
person Chria
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another awesome chapter. Much love~ That really seems like Sasuke to go on a total power trip while having sex with Naruto. Damn, Sasuke does shocking things in each chapter, and I'm eager for more of his perversion. LOL Naruto's reluctance is highly amusing. I would like you to dragging it out more before he gives in and when he does....I want him to be on top! HA, that'll teach Sasuke! I think it would be nice for Naruto to get 'some' of his pride back. I mean, he never really had a choice in this bond. I'm sure he loves it but it would piss me off that if was manipulated into it. Plus, revenge is sweet.
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
cool i love things that expand my vocab. and you just did and what a nice sounding word. and what a hot sexy lemon...drool i feel envy i wish i was there to watch that happening. I usually read this on mm.org but i saw you had updated when i was here and could not resist. Can't wait for a new chapter as you can see i am greedy.
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay update! Anyway, yeah...its ironic. I took a cold shower before i logged on and caught this update....Now it looks like i might need to take another one lol. Anyway that update was HAWT as usual. I kinda felt bad for Sakura there, being worried for Naruto but it'll work out right? Team Hebi really must've enjoyed that show, hehe. I would've'! :) Update soon.
person lo
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the way you do your sex scenes, they are actually really sexy and I never get bored. I think that not only is the story well done and you really get a feel for the characters but I feel you are not using that same tired formula that sooooo many people use and not very well. Anyway nice job.