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for 'Plans Of Hebi'

by littleolmee

person Crimson Kitsune
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Veeeeeery good, everything is going well, I like this fic alot. I also have some ideas for you if you don't mind? I think Sasuke should run up against some sort of delema later, like his brother manages to get Naruto from him, and removes Kyuubi from him, thus killing him. But he learns he has two ways to revive Naruto and save him, 1) Find the forbidden Jutsu, that was used to save Gaara, and I think Karin should have a stroke of compassion and take his place. or 2) Replace Kyuubui back in Naruto, but this will also have a risk, he will have a 50% of it being Kyuubi that will be the conscience personality.
So use it, don't it's up to you, keep up the good work, I'm really enjoying this. AND UPDATE!
person Cinderelly
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your writting. I cannot wait to see where you go with this story.
person LilBlackCat
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've always enjoyed your stories. I've reread a lot of them at times but this one is the best! I absolutely LOVE this story and I hope you would be able to update *hint hint* soon? ^^ sorry for being impatient but I really can't wait to see what will happen next! Much love to you for writing such a wonderful piece of writing!!
person Chria
schedule August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I had to stop reading several times because I kept going 'Did Sasuke just say that?' 'Did that just happen!?' This is very original plot that you have here. SmartassNaruto is constantly making me die of laughter because he really would say everything so crude and blunt like 'I never said I wanted anything that involved your dick up my ass!' 'Oh man, I'm going to vomit. I'm not sticking my tongue up your ass so forget!' I DIED! LOL Then we have PervertSasuke and wow, the stuff he says makes me blush. He is straight up addicted to fucking Naruto. I love how his world is crashing down around him because of it. It's a sweet revenge! Can't wait to see more of Naruto's friends try to get him back and god, how embarrassing it would be when they find out. *falls out of chair* Ok....ok.....please continue because I love this!
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad that Naruto has accepted his new bond with Sasuke and that the two of them are getting along better. The lemon was so hot!!! :)
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
naughty lil sas twisting naruto's wish to suit his own advantage lol Naruto was just so cute trying to convince sas not to sex him up while they traveling, sasuke is such a horny little thing in this "i dont see why not" lol, i love it!
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god. THat was so hot. x_X

Seriously, I can't wait for your next chapter.
person Anon
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, I guess Naruto really does love Sasuke that much. Hurry with the next chapter!!
person hisoka
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so he does want him by his side, new hed be spell bound.
keep up the good work your doin great
person blueh
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Naruto straddling? On top? :nosebleed: You've just made my day a whole lot... more exciting! Keep updating!!