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for 'Plans Of Hebi'

by littleolmee

person Anon
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Things aren't going as Sasuke planned, but at least the flegling bond between has started and is beginning to grow. Please continue!!
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very nice chapter love the lemon.
person Jei
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I always thought Hebi was "snake". When I first heard that's what he's calling his group, my respect for him dropped to 1. Seriously. That was the lamest name he could have possibly given them!

Calling it by your definition is much better... Interesing story.
person Rosebud
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I love this story! I hope you update soon cause I can't wait to read more! ^^
person Andrea
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow!super great story! i'm so happy to see some more current based fic.... great job
person dragon04
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I like to see what happen next.
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is wonderful!!! Very well written and I can't wait to see how their new relationship grows. :)
person Teda
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've stop being lazy and logged on to review....Anyway, you did it again. Another captivating chapter that was funny, sweet and twisted. In a good way!
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah new chapter i love it!
person hisoka
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so glad you updated,yes this is what ive been waiting for glad you finally did it i wont pester cuz everyones got other things to do besides write. so insted good luck on balancing life and all