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for 'Plans Of Hebi'

by littleolmee

person isai dice
schedule June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, this is juicy! That first chapter did it for me, so I was instantly hooked. I like knowing miss thinks she's so hot Karin got a little wakeup call this chapter! I was laughing my ass off when she realized what Sasuke used to interrogate Naruto. U rock!
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*LMFAO*.. oh YEAH!!!!... XD... I suddenly love that pointy-toothed guy even more!!.. XD

now I can't wait to see Naru's POV.. I mean.. come on.. waking up from being drugged with Sasuke's cock in his ass.. (*fangirl drool and squeal*)... uhmmm.. yeah.. had to be something!.. XD
person Finnel
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
~squeeks with joy while bouncing around the room to rentrer en soi's jude~
Yay!!! See! Its much too good to be left as a one-shot! and now it isn't!!! ~grin's manically~
~sniggers evily~ poor karin... ~sniggers some more~
please keep the up-dates coming!
i look forward to the next chapter!
luck!
person akume
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Serves here right. Maa, she kinda reminds me of Sakura with here know it all persona. Anyway, thanks for the update. Ja ne.
person llyoung
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2 was so funny. Thank you.
person mydarkerside
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh fantastic! I've been hoping more and more for someone to write Shippuden arc fanfics, especially with group Hebi! You've got everything in here that I was hoping for. Love the Sasuke/Naruto interaction so far and I'm very excited to see how their relationship plays out. I'll be watching for updates!!
person hisoka
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so...does that karin chick like sasuke?
updates?
person dragonlady sakura
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(Jumping around laughing) Hahahahaha! Lol. I so can't stand Karin, so this was a perfect story to read! Hilarious and worth the wait to read. Definitely love this fic.
person pdreamz
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh. I like this story. I'm looking forward to see what Naruto is going to do. I must be greedy, because that was just too short for me. I want more. Lots more! So stick with it and I'll keep my eye out for an update. Good job.
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL.


That was so funny man. You know one thing i forgot to point out was how i loved your portrayal or Sui here. You've caught the humor perfectly and i can practically picture the smile on his face lol. Nice job! Update soon.