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for 'Plans Of Hebi'

by littleolmee

person DARKON
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for not abanding this fic. I was enjoying this fic the first time around, but it seems that by
adding more depth you have improved it. Keep up the good work. Ilook forward to future chapters.


PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
DARKON
person hisoka
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i support you no matter my feelings but i just want to know, will it be a mirror image of the way it was before like the same events happening?
person Sean Wright
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn it! I hate author's notes, I hate them so much.
Please excuse my rant, but this is one of my favorite stories and I am fan of your writings on both AFF and FF.Net, so please don't take this as an attack on you, it is more of bane spitting at the cry-babies that your felt you had to placate.

I understand why you felt that you had go back to rewriting your story and I don't care. My whole problem is the author's note. I mean posting that was like giving your readers false hope about a new chapter being up and that is all your loyal fans want. Forget about the idiots who are ticked because you took your story down, heck you lost your way in the story and needed to find your back so you finish it, anyone who does not understand that has never written anything in their lives beyond what was required of them in life.
So please, remove the evil AN and forget the whiners. Like anyone who has the same problems with their own stories, I am patiently awaiting your next chapter.

DEATH TO THE AUTHOR'S NOTE!!! DEATH!

Wow, this is my first review on AFF. Feel special.

Later

Sean
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i appologize if i seemed snippy or anything i had a very bad day and seeing this story yet again edited but not updated was the straw that broke my back lol
the new chapter was written ok , though with any story redone u have that feeling in the back of ur mind that u've read it before and it sounds wrong cause u remember it a different way so it is frustrating plus i kinda wish u could have left the previous chapters up cause it was fun to reread those, they were fine in my opinion
meh
good luck with getting through these hopefully quickly and gaining new inspiration to finish this story
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ugh does anyone really want this all edited again? i doubt it
person hisoka
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so...does he live and whats konoha think about there great uchiha coming back but already being taken?hope you can update soon
person Yaoi-gi-oh
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well I love your stories up to now....however why should you redone them? I would write the new chapters and deta-ed after your friend feels better. Re-beta all chapters when the story finishes :)
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
begging for the unbeta'd chapters. the sad part is now that i know this isn't an update i think i will go read quixotism for comfort. good luck
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
why rewrite existing chapters which are fine, y not just reread ur whole story then work on the new chapter, thats what ppl are waiting for, and i think everyone wouldn't mind a couple grammar mistakes, we just miss this story
person Dhee
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
when you will update this story, i'm dying here waiting for this story update