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for 'Plans Of Hebi'

by littleolmee

person shadowphoenix143
schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG, this story is AWESOME! It kept me hooked the whole time! Your writing is excellent and the plot addicting! Can't wait to read more! Do you by chance email your readers when you update if they ask? It's ok if you don't, I will just bookmark it and check in from time to time and see if you updated, but if you do that would be great. My email is shadowphoenix143@comcast.net
person Mitamay
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I had to read it all before I reviewed, and I love it! I think it was sweet that Sasuke still had feelings for Naurto, even if he did have a rather round-about way of doing it...I offer my condolences, and hope things will look up soon. ^_^ EM
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry to hear whats happened. I hope everything will be alright and that you feel better soon. ^_^
person roro237
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very sorry for your lost:(
person kati
schedule December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
im so sorry that you have been ill. I hope that you feel better, so take it easy okay? I read chapters 3-8 all in one go... O_O wow my eyes have gone all wierd lol this is really entrancing, i like how IC you made everybody. I wonder what will happen with Itachi and Sasuke back in Konoha? x
person ibibi
schedule December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad to hear that you are getting better. also it's fine take your time, ones health is more important. Seriously I know how you feel, I get severe migranes almost everyday and its awful. Take care and I know this is a short reply but I'm sick too(we're sicky's).
Take care and I hope you feel better.
person jbjewel
schedule December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that kind of sick sucks!! worse comes to worse, try my great-grandma cure. hot chamomile tea with lemon and honey followed by a chaser of brandy. it may not cure you but you don't really care as much. glad you're feeling better and can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hope you feel better.
=)
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey where'd u go???? u didn't give up on this fic did u? *quivering bottom lip* please don't, i really really like it and want to read more please update
person Jess
schedule November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please update soon. i love this story.