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Damn, this chapter was good! Keep it up! ^^

WOOT! Go Naruto-kun!!!!

Itachi and Kisame are in trouble now. Kisame can't beat the other three members of Hebi and Naruto is going fox mode which Itachi has never faced yet, and let's not forget about Sasuke. Those two are so dead! I can't wait to see them get their asses kicked! Hurry with the next chapter!!!

Yee, yea, I'm a faithful reader and reviewer ^_^. And i'm so glad this chap came out so quickly!

I'm so glad Jiraiya made his appearance. I'm glad Sasuke's protecting Naruto, but i hope everything won't go too badly, especially what with Naruto doing the defending now. About Sasuke though, his technique is Chidori, not Chodori, unless you are doing this purposely. Anyway, update soon. :)

Thanks for the reply dear and the update alert,

With that said OMG what a chapter. I loved the part when Pakkun gave a past account of Naruto's relentless search for Sasuke even though to humor Naruto a little (Naruto was so emo when he sat in the statue).


Pakkun's words about the mixed scent and proof of Sasuke's and Naruto's *love juice* and Team Seven's reaction was hysterical, who knew Sai was a sarcastic comedian. Kakashi's insight is very clear and Sai's remark on Naruto's cuteness ha. I like how Sakura is no longer OBSESSED with Sasuke I guess she moved on unlike Naruto and where did that end him up with. A pervy Sasuke!

I liked how you incorporated the manga's events with this story, Naruto was able to help team Hebi this time with his clones as well as imputing his dream of being Hokage. Jiraiya's comment on tea was funny reminded me of those ladies (and myself) who serve hot/iced tea to guests. Jiraiya's response to Kakashi is refreshing he accepts Naruto and cares for him no matter what. He admits that Naruto is like a grandson to him and that he hopes that Sasuke did not force Naruto.



Hebi's interactions were interested each one has their own agenda known or unknown though I guess Karin changed hers (a SasuNaru member??). Suigetsu's sword trophies or collection. Ohh burn Kisame insulted Suigetsu (hope Suigetsu shows him that its not true).


Like the Sasuke and Naruto team dynamics, I loved how Sasuke put his chakra into the clone to save Naruto from Itachi. Sasuke pulled another wave arc, it's de ja vue all over gain.



This is a big cliffhanger....


I'm shocked at Sasuke taking makes me think that he now truly loves Naruto or that it was his master plan...... Nevertheless I hope Sasuke lives and he and Naruto love each other in the end.


Again it was a wonderful chapter and the cliffy of doom (just kidding) will make me wonder what will happen to the boys.

"Where you stand? From what I've noticed you don't do much standing blondie."

I just about DIED laughing right then and there. That was so funny, my nephew is still looking at me funny. . . .

-Damp *I applaud you for your funniness.*

WAHHH!! Another smexy piece once again! *faint from nose bleed* I love how you are making sure there is action with a bit of other...."action" lol ohhh I can't wait for ch 7 to come out! omg! What will happen next!

That chap was quite funny, and heart warming all at once. I don't have alot of time to elaborate since i'm at work, but great job! Can't wait for the next chap. :)

This chapter is love. Its amazing characters development,insights as well as confessions and revelations.
The character interactions are amazing.

Naruto & Suigetsu : They act like siblings. Naruto mentions that Sasuke is like a brother to him but to me it's love. When Naruto and Suigetsu talked it felt like brothers discussing ones love life and Naruto paying said advice with a favor.


The people in Konoha must be shocked. I laughed when I read Sakura's thoughts. She's a little closet perv.
Tsunade was funny on hoe serious she was when she mentioned the report that the only thing in danger is Naruto's butt from the Uchiha .

Karin was clever as well when instead of speaking outside she bursts in to tell them about Itachi and then leaving with a huge grin on her face. It's funny but when reading your story i imagine Karin and Sakura as being siblings , both closet pervs, annoyed by the guys and serious in their work.

Naruto's talk with Kyuubi was interesting to say the least. I see foreshadowing.

Once again Naruto is so sweet in a harsh boyish way. He is insecure about his relationship with Sasuke.
Sasuke is SO JEALOUS to the point of being sweet.

I LOVED it when they discuss their feelings for each other and how Sasuke will NEVER betray him awww love. And Naruto is so mischievous wanting Sasuke to tell him that he is irresistible. I feel that their relationship was strength in this chapter.

I loved this quote "Well he'll be happy to know the only thing I'm going to inject into you from now on his my semen." Sasuke is hilarious what a major perv!!!!!!!!!! I hope they stay together through out the chapters and if Naruto doubts their love Sasuke will show him how wrong he is physically and multiple times ^_^

Again I loved the ending when Naruto and Sasuke fell down and Sasuke had leaves on his mouth aww thats love.

i hope these boys become less emotionally challenged.

Can't wait for the next chapter and I will definitely check out your new story.

SO ITACHI FOUND THEM BEFORE KAKASHI,SAKURA,AND SAI COULD(AND KIBA SHINO AND...WHO ELSE?)I WANNA SEE SAKURAS REACTION TO NARUTO AND SASUKE BEING LOVERS THATLL BE FUN,WHATS JUUGO SUIGETSU AND KARIN GONNA DO AFTER ITACHI
AND KISAME ARE DEAD?HOPE YOU CAN UPDATE SOON CANT WAIT TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS AND WHO IT IS COMING FOR THEM