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for 'Plans Of Hebi'

by littleolmee

person leanne
schedule September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hot, warm and sexy and just so darling! and funny a very likable chapter.
schedule September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i now think that there is a freaky thing going on. i just reread trial (i'm dana by the way) and clicked on plans of hebi and boom ther was an update. i had totally forgotten about this blazin story and for that i have to apoligize. i love the sasuke in this story he has all the jealous,possesive, murderous intent of a serial killer. i also loved how you had them having sex to burn off the medicine and help bring back kyuubi's chakra. i'm surprised that you didn't make him more of a pervert but it is possible that it could happen later (one could hope). not that i'm not loving the story the way it is but are you going to mpreg this like trial. are any of the other members going to pair up with any of the konoha ninjas. i can't wait til you update and see how everything is going to turn out especially the confrontation between itachi and sasuke (two smexy bad ass brothers but not together). i don't like uchihacest.
person Anon
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope Sasuke and Naruto kick Itachi's ass big time. Hurry with the next chapter!!!
person Rosebud
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Again, you've turned out another brilliant chapter my dear. This story never fails to amaze me. And this chapter...just wow... I loved everything about it. I'm glad that things are better Sasuke and Naruto now and that friendship moment between Naruto and Suigetsu was awesome! (sorry rabid Sui/Naru fan... even if it's only friendship ^^;) But any way, this chapter rocked my socks and I CAN'T wait till the next one. Oh and that end part with Karin and the cursed seal line cracked me up!

Awesome writing, I can't wait to read more! ^^
person gaara89
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope you update soon! I've been waiting for this, it was great!
person sethian
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely fantastic Slash scene!
Wow! I loved it, it was really hot! seriouly :D
I'm looking forward to read to next chapters! Your fic is candy to my imagination!!
person Saiou-chan
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAAAAAAAY! AN UPDATE! *does happy dance*
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww, Sasuke admitted his feelings for Naruto! That was so sweet! So they will be fighting Itachi before the Leaf ninja find them? Yay! Some action! :)
person Saiou-chan
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
P.S. could you give me the address of all the sites you have that original story on? slytherin_whitch@yahoo.com
person mscs3
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh I loved this chapter. your sense of humor is as wonderful as always. Looking forward to more. Me