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this is a beautiful story, and you are an amazing writer. thank you for sharing this.

i really enjoy this story. the concept is so daring and successful. Not that same ol', trite plot, and same ol' boy + boy = smut. (though smut is always welcome.) keep up the good work. :-)

Hmmm.... very good. I feel so bad for little Sasuke. He just can't catch a break apparently. And Naruto... miscommunication, it's a bitch, but then, where would fiction be without it.

Poor Sasuke...I can't even imagine what all this is like for him and then to top it off, his friends were saying that kind of stuff. I just want to hug him! It makes me wish Arashi was still there...*sniffles*

Wonderful job! I think you're doing a great job of keeping characters in character...thats why I love au stories too, it gives you a bit of leeway as to how you make them react and all.

Again, wonderful work!

Ezzy

Interesting twists and turns. It will definitely be interesting to see how Naruto take Sasuke initially using his Dad - but then falling in love with him - and then falling back in love with Naruto. o.O What twists. lol Keep up the good work. ~ Jelp

Sad...

Big emo tears!

Good story. Please update soon.

The relationship between Arashi and Sasuke seemed really endearing but I can see how it would look so fucked up to Naruto. I felt really bad that Sasuke's family disowned him because of his relationship. Hey, is Itachi going to play a big role in the story? I hope he does! I can hardly wait to see Naruto and Sasuke's reaction regarding Arashi's last wish. The part of practically writing everything off to Orochimaru if they didn’t follow it through totally threw me off, that was just so evil of him, giving everything to Orochimaru! But kind of funny too when you think about it! Update soon!

Love your story plot here. I wonder if Naruto knows about his father and Sasuke since he didn't even come to visit his father at all during the last five years nor has he seen Sasuke. Unless he had another good reason for not being there when his father was ill and dying?

omg Yes! Keep going! Oh I'm so intrigued! You couldn't possibly be mean enough to leave me hanging like that. (pouts) I've never seen a Naruto fic like this one and I'm always on the look out for an original plot. Keep writing and I'll love you forever! =^.^=