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for Irreplacable

by Midnightstorm

person Allys
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM

Hey, I saw that it was you so I decided to give it a read. I'm sorry I freaked out on you, it's not that bad really, I guess I'm just really high strung right now, or would it be wound tight? who knows... I liked this, it was sad but not overwhelmingly so, and I still really love your writing so here I am one more time :), waiting to see where this goes, it's a very good Idea. It's definitely plausible, and Arashi being the sweetheart that he normally is would definitely have earned some love, I'm really wondering how Naruto and Hinata are doing, if they're still together after all this time. Wouldn't it be funny if Sasuke's impromptu relationship ended up being stronger than Naruto's marriage? Why didn't they talk for five years? Was it cause of Arashi or did they just get really busy with their separate lives? I guess I'll have to wait and see. Thanks for writing.
person Zrina
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooooo, interesting beginning!!! Can't wait to see where this goes! I love the concept.
person Drumanel
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It is really good, but did Sasuke not see Naruto for five years because of his relationship with Arishi (I can't spell his name). If not then why haven't they spoken.
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
mwhaha you know what I think, thanks for the mention. I know this story will do well. The idea is fresh and new...and well...how could it not!
person llyoung
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's a good idea. Please continue.