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for Wrong Shade of Green

by VantheKeyofLain

schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it, I love it, I love it!!! I can't wait for the next update! BTW I've decided to take on your challenge, expect it in June!

Neko
person animekid
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
when i finally read this I was like...

"Yay leesak!"

and then....few chapters later BAM!

*DIES*

OMFG! Gai and Sakura! ^_____^

*loves it!*

I mean...such a rare pairing done so wonderfully! I love the input of Gai's story, (I believe he can do many of the other kinds of ninjutsu, but a genin at seven like kakashi?!) the humor, the underline tones of Sakura's pain to possible suicide, and Naruhina! I mean...even the fight scenes kicked ass!

Hell I finally came back to reading straight fics again and I was floored to find such a great piece on this site! Finally something besides kakashi with everyone or naruto with everyone =_=

keep up the youthful job! Hahahah Gai is such a fucking pervert and I want to see more of this!

but i feel so sorry for lee when he finds out ^^; 'Sensei how COULD YOU!!!!!!!!'

person animekid
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
kami it's leesak

It's late and I am going to finish reading it and give out a better review tommorow but until then keep it up!

so hard to find good leesak =_=
schedule January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*swears to keep checking for updates* Gai and Sakura are an odd pairing, but you do it very well
person Geda
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't know whether to be pleased or mortified. lol.

In all seriousness, you're very talented and you've drawn me in, for better or worse.
schedule December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
kawaii!! as always, loved it. You wrote the action scenes very awesome, I was on the edge of my seat!! I am looking forward to the next chappie, hopefully soon!! other then have a happy new year!!
schedule December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dude! This fic kicks ass! I have never seen a Gai/Sakura story before so thank you so much for writing one! Not only is this an awesome pairing, but you're a great writer too! Please update soon! I can't wait for the next chapter!
person oohshiny
schedule December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG if you kill the main character i am SURE MANY MANY ppl and reviewers will be livid(i like the word livid... it sounds cool.....) including myself. XDD also, tnx for straightening things out. i was confuzzled about whether it was gai or lee every 1nce in awhile b4, but now i kno. also, yeah it took awhile, but i havent heard from a lot o ppl on aff since, like... august? september....? i dunno. but hurry and keep me updated or ill forget and go on some other tangent and abandon all hope for humanity by destroying the internet. why? cuzi just got that from the top of my head and im really tired. anyway, as gai would say.... NICE JO-BU!! *good guy pose* *blinding grin*
person oohshiny
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ROFL!!! sweeeeeeheeheeeet..... plz email me when you update this fic, ok? i'd like to keep up on it. my email is deannathx@comcast.net
schedule August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so awesome, I can nowsay I am sold on the idea of sakura and gai. Just do me a favor, make her a little less intense and angry, I mean it is cute sometimes but not all the time. Also more sexual tension, I would love to see a situation with her and gai, or her and lee to make gai jealous. I am looking forward to more, hopefully soon.