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for Wrong Shade of Green

by VantheKeyofLain

schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, that was so wrong, but very very funny. I never expected Gai-sensei to be the one. Awsome story!

Neko
schedule June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*takes a deep breath* HAHAHAHAHAAHA..... *sighs* omg that was just too priceless. Poor Sakura, being man-handled unconscious by Gai of all people and then actually being seen snuggling against him in her prone position. HHAHAHAHA.... I absolutely freaking loved the end part, I would have paid money to see Sakura spanking the Taijutsu Master as a five year old. The title so clicks into place now. lol Very well written and a wonderful shocker at the end with a good sense of humor. I'll definately have to look into your other pieces.
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wait, what? Was she with Gai, I mean with Gai And did everyone know it was gai. Oh and please tell me she is going to end with lee. I lvoe those 2 togther, not enough fic os those 2. So, I am looking forward to more and hopefully soon.
person Ero-Bontenmaru
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's going great. Keep it that way.
schedule May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this was so very very sweet an beautiful great work