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for Kankuro Gets a Licking

by Croup

schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!!!! KIBA CAN LICK ME ANYTIME... AND BITE :)

Seriously, good job! You got the start of what could be a seriously hot story, I like how well you stayed in character.
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I read the summery and was like "WTF? LOL I've got to read this for shits and giggles." It's lovely! Humor abounds and for all the humor it was still pleasantly sticky and tasty. Good job!
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol, loved it. Always thought they'd be a good pairing, its about time somebody wrote a story bout them :D (and the body paint, hehehe, awesome, "Oh you kinky bitch" lol made me laugh!!!

I demand you write more! heheheh, I'll pay in reviews :D lol

SD&FA
person cynaga
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Read it again - loved it even more. :D
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HEADSTRONG SMEXY BASTARDS FOR THE WIN!!! THIS IS WIN!!! ^_^ I shake your hand and then GLOMP you!! I love the smarmy comebacks, the kinky...er...kinks, and the MAHN SEXX!! LOVE IT!!
person danixx
schedule May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just wow. That was hot. Really hot. You had them both really in character and still be so... wow. Very good job dear. I would love to read more stuff from you if it's all hot like that. You made my day!
person cynaga
schedule May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am dying for this! KankyxKiba is one of my favorite pairs. I love how you brought them together using their most known characteristics (paint&smell). YOU ROCK!!! Please, please, please continue... :D
schedule May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice. More?