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April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is SLUTTY. I like.
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September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
>///< H.O.T . well, sasUKE is deadly gorgeous. any men would fall for him~
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August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!! totally loved it
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August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
crazy dirty and funny.very much liked
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July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was so insane! See, an aggressive, bold, forward, and possessive Naruto is hot. I thought there was a lot of feeling in it and a lot of passion because he's holding on and never letting go and Sasuke is all pissy cause he lets him. I freaking love it! o^_^o
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May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The story is nice (shirt and sweet), but it has a weird ending. It doesn't feel like it's finished. Also, when I read it the first time, I thought Naruto was raping Sasuke. XS Sasuke never gives in (his body does, but does his mind?) and stays negative (verbally) to Naruto's molesting.
You should change the ending a bit, so your readers understand Sasuke actually likes the molesting-part (heck, he should ;P), unless you meant for Sasuke to be like this?
(I hope I don't sound to flamey. I really don't mean to. >.<;;)
ja ne ^^V
You should change the ending a bit, so your readers understand Sasuke actually likes the molesting-part (heck, he should ;P), unless you meant for Sasuke to be like this?
(I hope I don't sound to flamey. I really don't mean to. >.<;;)
ja ne ^^V
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May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so unbelievably HOT. Seme Naruto is just so much better.
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May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was not a rape scene. It was just an aggressive type of sex w/c i love by the way.
I am not, i repeat NOT into those rape scene at all.
I am not, i repeat NOT into those rape scene at all.
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May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was hot. HAWT. Seme Naruto is always fun! Great job!
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May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL, That was way too funny, and hott in a twisted sort of way XD. Wow that was fast, LOL - Very nine and a half weeks. All Naruto need to do right now is take him home, chain him up and never let him leave. Between amazing sex, stockholm syndrome and compatibility he'll never want to leave XD.