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December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...a tensy bit confusing in format...
schedule
May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Giant Wall Of Text crits Blayze's brain for a fuckload of damage.
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May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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Excuse me a moment, I need to restrain myself.
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Okay. I'm going to approach this politely.
First, revise this. There is no question it needs it. Break up the block of text. Put quotation marks around speech, and start whole new paragraphs after speech. You need to make sure your formatting carries over in your revision, because it did not this time.
I look forward to reading this when it is revised.
~LZ
Excuse me a moment, I need to restrain myself.
.......
Okay. I'm going to approach this politely.
First, revise this. There is no question it needs it. Break up the block of text. Put quotation marks around speech, and start whole new paragraphs after speech. You need to make sure your formatting carries over in your revision, because it did not this time.
I look forward to reading this when it is revised.
~LZ