rate_review Reviews

I’m really enjoying the “slow burn” of this story, how everything is so descriptively erotic. And I like the Ita/Kisa and Sasu/Naru interactions, each master/slave relationship show its own personality, approach and response. Even though its obvious that this is a master/slave situation, I like that the "slaves" are not necessarily responding as their subordinate position dictates, which makes for interesting tensions for the masters, creating a battle of wills for dominance and submission. So I hope you will continue this story because I’d really like to see how things are going to progress: will Kisame get his way as the uke that tops Itachi from the bottom (not if Itachi can help it) or is Naruto going to be the pushy noisy uke that slowly gets Sasuke to "compromise" more than he wants (or is Sasuke gonna let Naruto know who's in charge)?

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I hadn't realized someone else had taken up the challenge. This is good stuff. There were scenes, such as the one with Iruka, where I was like "that is just as I pictured it" and then there were others were it went beyond my expectations. The relationship between Ita and Kisame is great! I love what you are doing so far, can't wait till the next chapter!

Well, You caught my attention. ^^ It kinda makes me think I'd see them if I went to town. x_x;; lol Well, I'm really enjoying this so far. I even like the Itachi and Kisame bits. Kisame isn't a bad looking guy after all. :P hehe. Can't wait till the next update!

please update soon. I like this story.

hot stuff

Ahhhh, it makes me happy. XD

I don't take to the slave master fictions well because they are mostly poorly done but I liked this one. I also like the ItachixKisame side more than whatever it is Naruto and Sasuke are doing. Not that I'm KisamexItachi buff. I chose stories not based on pairing but on skill. If the story is good I don't care who is doing who. So I look forward to more of Sasuke's older brother and his mostly obedient counter-part.

very hot. i eagerly look foward to more.

Shit all I gotta say is update!!! OOOOH! Please do! I can hardly wait until the next one!! ^^ Until then! Ttul! Awesome job!

I say keep with the bondage since Naruto seems to be turned on when he can't do anything.