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Chapter 18: (*Whew*) She’s alive. Thank God.

Hmm, this scene sure looks familiar. ^^ . . . . New character? If I were to guess she was from the manga, I’d say she’d be Anko. . . . The summary is worded really well. Normally I don’t like summaries, but this one’s okay. =) . . . . Ehh, not “fairing” -- “faring.” (*sweat*) . . . . “They were getting the hell out of this town.” I get the feeling that it’s going to be much harder than that. õ_o . . . . (*sigh*) Great. Homophobic coworkers. Wonderful. ¬_¬ . . . . I wonder if Ino needing treatment might make it harder for everyone to get out of town. I dunno how the politics work. . . . I like the detail about “the words scrolling across the bottom of the screen.” Very subtle. ;) . . . . (*after reading the “quieter environment” paragraph*) I heard that Canada has places like that. . . . Damn reporters. They’re so nosy and pushy that it wouldn’t be surprising if one of them was an assassin in disguise. ¬_¬ . . . . “Naruto’s body [. . .] ground.” Huh? What just happened?! õ_õ . . . . Oh, that’s what happened. õ_õ . . . . Ooh, good description! “The next thing Sasuke [. . .] more in his mind.” Love it! =D . . . . Love the description of Sasuke’s panic and his course of actions. Very convincing. =D . . . . Okay, I love the dialogue between Sasuke and Sakura, but, uh, little suggestion: “‘Thank you, Sakura,’ He said sincerely as he pulled out into traffic.” I think the “sincerely” might’ve been a little unnecessary; I could kind of tell he was totally sincere. No big deal, really. ^_^;
(*snicker*) Very appropriate how the woman explained what “not available” meant. ^^ . . . . Ohhh! It’s Kurenai! =DD . . . . Love how helpless Sasuke feels. . . . Great portrayal of Kurenai as the FBI agent. I can totally see her at it. :heart: . . . . This urge for violence Sasuke’s getting -- I wonder if he ever felt this way before on the job. . . . Once again, awesome ending sentence! ^_^
O.O Kakashi!! . . . . And -- he’s not wearing it? (*blink*blink*) Does not compute. o_o . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . What? . . . . How. . . ?
. . . . . . . . . . I’m crying now. Seriously. . . . . . . . . . . . Why?
Love Sasuke’s speech starting with “Don’t you think I know that?” I really love it. . . . I like how he focuses on the postcard of Vegas. Very realistic. I’ve done that too when I’m in a lot of grief; something just seems to stand out and you just keep staring at it.
So how did Kakashi and Ebisu get so beat up? . . . . I like the way Ebisu stated the ground rules.
So Sasuke’s becoming kind of an alcoholic. Interesting. . . . (*weak giggle*) I like how Kakashi announced his arrival and Sasuke’s actions. (Sorry, I’m still crying.) . . . . I guess Kakashi has seen a lot in his day for him to be acting like this.

(*bursts into renewed sobs*) I’ve never been so unhappy at the end of a chapter. Not due to a lack of skill, it was really good. Too good. This story has really gotten to me. I know this sounds super childish, but please, please find some way for Sasuke to be happy. With Naruto. I know Naruto’s . . . but I can’t help it. This hurts so badly. I’m begging you, Zrina, please make this work out.
Also, please don’t take too long to update this time. This chapter was really sad, and it’s not something I enjoy reading after such a long wait.

Ohhhh...
Naruto's a BlackJack dealer in Vagas named Minato now!!!

You are evil for this...even if we know there will be a happy ending
...maybe.

I really enjoyed this.
The nasty twist, Sasuke's pain. seamingly vague, but still clues.
Excellant chapter:)!!!

OMG! It`s the postcard.. isn`t it?? READ THE POSTCARD SASUKE!! naruto can`t be dead... he just can`t. great chappie. ^_^

Ahhh!! I love your story!! I thought it was finally over, but wow, there's still more! Please update soon! Or maybe you shouldn't since it's taking me away from studying..

yay, great story so far. 2 chapters left? though looking at it i bet you end up adding another 1 or 2 to what you planned.


Can;t wait till the end, though guess i have to, 2 reasons. guessing you'll put start the sequel to "The Sound of Dreams" and because this story is also a great story.

keep up the great work

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! i cant believe you did that...that was awesome!!! please just let this have a happy ending...

YOU KILLED IZUMO AND KOTETSU o-0
hehehehehehe

nice trial work.
nice bathroom moment.
I wanted them to talk too, but sex is just alright with me!
I love this story.
thank you:)

YES! An update! Awesome can't wait for the next one...god whats gonnna happen next

This was so good...I've missed you...^_^ (from a crazy about your fics lurker)

Yea! Zrinaday! Oh this was so worth the wait:) All the court proceeding and still a sexy bit of stick play. I loved it!!!!!!!