rate_review Reviews

That was increible! I can't wait to rea more. Please hurry and update. I'm just dying from antisipation. I love how the story turned out and the nice flow of events plus the limes an lemons were delicious. This is officially my second all time favorite story.

Awesome story!

LOL Kakashi really is an ass in this chapter. First the comment about Sakura and then Naruto being a toy, but when Kakashi said that thing about Naruto being banged up I was like: "Oh snap! No he di'n't!" (I swear, no more daytime talk shows!) When Sasuke punched Kakashi for Naruto's honor, is it alright that I squealed with the cuteness of it all? I mean seriously, who squeals in delight when some one punches some one else. A sadist. But I'm only that part of the time. ;)

“We’re good here. Just a friendly disagreement about psychology.”

I laughed for a good few minutes with that one. I don't know, it's just XD !

When Kakashi went into the apartment I was all "oh nooooes it's too late" But then he gave the evidence to Ebisu (I like their interaction) I let out a big sigh of relief. Yay a veiled Tayuya reference! (is a closet Tayuya fan, I love her foul mouth) Thank you so much for this chapter, I can't wait till the next though I am still uneasy about Naruto's situation. Don't know why. I guess I won't feel fully safe until you say it's the end.

Aikage

Hm, not much to say about this chapter. Kinda just seems like it was used to try and progress the story. Anyways, looking forward for more ^^

Oooo very nice, tying everything up nicely. Can't wait to read more!
~ Dani

i just found this story and i really think you have talent. there are very few stories out there with a good plot and well written smex *grins*.. anyway, though i did want to mention something about your writing.
you have amazing potential though i noticed that you seem to fall back on the dreaded 'adverb' a lot. i think that given you're such an amazing writer, you can definately steer clear of them in most situations. i mean ,you really dont need them! the 'said suspicous*ly*', dry*ly*, sarcastical*ly* etc etc.. they really take a lot out of your otherwise awesome story. espcially in this chapter. there were a little too many of them for me to ignore. anyway, i hope you dont hate me for this.. *hides in a corner*. im still one of your biggest fans. :D and ps i LOVED sound of dreams!! my fav story EVER!!! ( this comes a close second though)..hehe.
update soon~

Thanks for the new chapter!! Can't wait until Naruto and Sasuke are reunited!! :)

Z!! This detecive story is great. I'm glued to my seat reading and putting clues together on the case:) I couldn't remember what cases Sasuke was working on I'll be going back to refreashing my memior on the details:) This is what I love about your stories. Their put together like a novel. The story line is just as hot as the sex ^_^

You give great research!:)
I'm married to a cop so I know when it rings true and when to laugh my ass off!
Ahh the joy of gathering evidence.

Kakashi and Ebisu are a hoot - Ilove them!

As the plot thickens! Dun dun dun! ^_^ I'm excited to see Orochimaru behind bars for good, and a sort of, but not quite, happily ever after. I'm usually not a big fan of this pairing, but for some reason, I can see this fic having a side Sakura/Ino pairing. I guess it's just me feeling bad for Sakura since I know she gets jipped in a lot of fics, mine included.

Great fic (as I think I've told you before), and as always I look forward to each update! ~ Jelp