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January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
woot! update...nice, definitely moved the plot along. I do hope you're a happy-ending kind of person...But I'll definitely stick around to find out.
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January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
they really got nowere in thier investigation with naruto.but thats okay when will they let him see sasuke agian?or will he see sakura first?hope you can update soon
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January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
If it helps I think Ebisu is a fucking idiot as well as Kakashi and who knows who else. It is my instinct for Naruto not to trust the FBI because there could be spies there, but also because they are seeming to make light of the situation. Like Naruto is going to help them build the testimony up and the evidence then he testifies and everything will be everything, but hello even witnesses in the witness protection program can be gotten too and Orochimaru is powerful. And while Ino needs therapy she also needs Naruto he has been her pillar of strength throughout this ordeal.
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January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Naruto and Sasuke are being separated forever?! I hope that doesn't happen!!! Thanks for the new chapter. :)
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January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful!!! ^_^
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January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the way you're making this realistic in that the cops and FBI are involved like they should be. Sure Sasuke did his bit where he ran off to save Naruto, but the feds. are involved like they would be normally unlike (as you put it) those TV shows and such. Kudos to you. Even if some mishap happens and they go fighting all on their own, I still love the way you portrayed everything so far. You've got a real knack for the realistic. Keep up the good work, and I look forward to your next update! ~ Jelp
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January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes!
moving along nicely.
thanks for the Sasuke bone:)
you have great dynamics with your characters, always ring true.
moving along nicely.
thanks for the Sasuke bone:)
you have great dynamics with your characters, always ring true.
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January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn Zrina. This is so Law and Order right now I can hear the - dun dun sound XD. *Glomps* Phew!! Sasuke's Okay *Huggles u* And Naruto's okay and things are being set into motion :D. *Sighs* It sucks that they're being kept so far apart though ;_;. I'm a little worried about Naruto worrying about Sakura being with Sasuke. LOL, yeah , not so much worried about the two of them, they're friends, but I worried about what he thinks of the two of them. LOL, I'm dying to know where this is going. You been throwing twists every time I turn around XD. I Love that. Sorry XD, I can't help but be excited. *Chuu* Thanks for updating honey *Loves u*
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January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Z...>.< *takes deep breath*...*looses it* YOU ENDED IT THERE!!! ARE YOU TRYING TO GIVE ME SOME KIND OF ATTACK!!!
*clears throat*
umm right, okay >.< let me think. So... Sasuke did show up to rescue Naruto but - man i didn't think this was how it was going to go, but the scene, i think you wrote it with real skill (as you do everything else heh) and I could see it all so clearly in my head, i mean there was no confusion as to who was where and doing what/ Think karin's a bitch wish she'd gotten shot, really hate Orochimaru in this, i'm usually not this bad with him but in this fic i completely hate him and want someone to cut his dick off the sick fuck. Well done INO!!! I was so proud, i mena she managed to shake herself out of that state and manage to move i mean, she deserves one hell of a medal and not to mention justice - and KABUTO WENT DOWN!!! WOOOOO!!! But... SASUKE GOT SHOT DAMN IT! NARUTO GOT STABBED!!! And now i'm so damn worried and >.< - okay - not gonna go there so onto something else.
The Sakura Sasuke scene towards the end of the chapter. I really liked that, it was - IC and I think it had the right mood for what had happened between them, it kind of reminded me for some reason of that time during the chunin exam when Sasuke asked Sakura not to tell Naruto about the cursed seal, it was a time when he was beginning to let his worry for his team mates show and accepting them, it's rare seeing that side of Sasuke even though it's very much a part of him and completely IC and i think you brought it out so perfectly.
And then... that bitch! who the hell is that nurse!!! show her to me and i'll kick her ass and shove her into her grave for them!!! and where's naruto and ino!!! >.< oh god Z this is a hell of a cliff hanger *sigh* but you don't need me to tell you it's good ne?
can't wait for the next one heh
hina xXxx
*clears throat*
umm right, okay >.< let me think. So... Sasuke did show up to rescue Naruto but - man i didn't think this was how it was going to go, but the scene, i think you wrote it with real skill (as you do everything else heh) and I could see it all so clearly in my head, i mean there was no confusion as to who was where and doing what/ Think karin's a bitch wish she'd gotten shot, really hate Orochimaru in this, i'm usually not this bad with him but in this fic i completely hate him and want someone to cut his dick off the sick fuck. Well done INO!!! I was so proud, i mena she managed to shake herself out of that state and manage to move i mean, she deserves one hell of a medal and not to mention justice - and KABUTO WENT DOWN!!! WOOOOO!!! But... SASUKE GOT SHOT DAMN IT! NARUTO GOT STABBED!!! And now i'm so damn worried and >.< - okay - not gonna go there so onto something else.
The Sakura Sasuke scene towards the end of the chapter. I really liked that, it was - IC and I think it had the right mood for what had happened between them, it kind of reminded me for some reason of that time during the chunin exam when Sasuke asked Sakura not to tell Naruto about the cursed seal, it was a time when he was beginning to let his worry for his team mates show and accepting them, it's rare seeing that side of Sasuke even though it's very much a part of him and completely IC and i think you brought it out so perfectly.
And then... that bitch! who the hell is that nurse!!! show her to me and i'll kick her ass and shove her into her grave for them!!! and where's naruto and ino!!! >.< oh god Z this is a hell of a cliff hanger *sigh* but you don't need me to tell you it's good ne?
can't wait for the next one heh
hina xXxx
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January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Honey, you can take as long as you want!
It's quality, not quantity...and you have that in spades!
o_0 ooooh was Karin out on bail or did they get some background chick to
off Sasuke? Lots of action, I LIKE IT!!! Oh Queen Cliffhanger, most
excellent:)
It's quality, not quantity...and you have that in spades!
o_0 ooooh was Karin out on bail or did they get some background chick to
off Sasuke? Lots of action, I LIKE IT!!! Oh Queen Cliffhanger, most
excellent:)