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for Blackmail and Betrayal

by Zrina

person hisoka
schedule January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
youd think sakura would have the sense to stop the nurse insted of letting her go along and inject him, or at least stop her.who was it anyway, karin?though i dought that.so were is naruto and ino anyway?im glad he saved them, they have the evidence to put orochimaru inder lock and key right they didnt destroy it for some idiotic reason(i dont think sasuke would or kakashi for that matter)was the nurse tayuya?im reallly curious ive been waiting for this for so long and i no its almost over but i still wanna read more,hope you can update soon
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! Drama!!


What with the last chapter, I was afraid Naruto was going to have to go against Sasuke, but the fact Sasuke arrived and helped save him, I was all sorts of relieved. But now they're trying to kill him?! Go Sakura! Too bad she didn't stop that "nurse" sooner. ^^


Anyway, another great chapter! Keep up the great work!
person Alondra
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome stuff!! Keep it up!!
person person
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow! this has got to be the best fan fiction I ever read. the plot is great!! please update soon! I love this story!
person Davey Lockhart
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You have awesome stories. I ike them all. I hope you update this one sooner than you did last time. I can't wait to read it.
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You had to leave it hanging again!!! :( I hope Sasuke is going to be alright and I'm worried about what happened to Naruto. Thanks for the new chapter! :)
person roro237
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I misses you! Yea!Ino got him:) Having Sasuke and Sakura make peace was nice. Especially sense someone came to kill him. I hope Sakura quick action will save him!? Looking forward to the next^_^
person Rachel
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is the first update that I have actually witnessed, since I came across your stories recently. I have never felt the pain of your cliffhangers! It hurts just as much as Sasuke right now! Well, maybe not that bad....but *pulls hair*
person Jelp
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My guess was that was Karin trying to kill Sasuke. Good thing Sakura was there. Sasuke better be okay, but if he's not, it'd be kinda funny if Naruto got the chance to help save Sasuke now by going after Orochimaru. And - YOU'RE MEAN! LEAVING ANOTHER CLIFFHANGAR! ::sigh:: I do it too, so I guess I can't really talk much. Ah well. Looking forward to your next update, and I'm glad to hear you're still alive. :-) ~ Jelp
person Allys
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! Zrina!!! I'm going to SCREAM!!!! LOL *Tackle glomps and shakes while hugging* Arrrgh *sighs* You're trying to kill me I know it. Aw Maaannnn!! *headdesk* It's probably a damn good thing that there was all that space between these two chapters cause if they came close together I think I would have had an aneurism. This is too eventful for me, my poor heart can't take it. LOL *shakes head* I love this story it's CRAZY! *huggles and squishes*.

Is it really terribly bad of me that all I could think when Naruto got up and lunged after Kabuto was Damn that's HOTT!! LOL, sorry *blushes* But an naked, enraged and bloody Naruto, is just... Woooo *fans self* LOL I love you XD. This chapter was awesome. You had me going from start to finish. If I wasn't wide eyed and tense I was laughing or trying not to drool. I'm very happy with Sakura in this chapter too. She was nice and helpful XD. I like when she does good stuff, and I love that she saw the humour in it and that they'll still be friends. Cause i know Sasuke would want that. If he survives DAMMIT!!! *rails again*. I demand Huggles!!! LOL, But most of all I just really REALLY want to say THANK YOU!!! You updated!!! I was good and I didn't beg or bug, but Boy was I tempted to. So thank you honey! ♥♥♥