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November 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my... OH MY GOD !!!!!!
I remember reading this what seems like centuries ago and loving it to death, and them the site it was on was closed and I nearly cried because I couldn't read it anymore!
I LOVE THIS STORY!
If it wasn't for the fact that I'm currently sick, then I would be jumping around the room in excitement right now!
I remember reading this what seems like centuries ago and loving it to death, and them the site it was on was closed and I nearly cried because I couldn't read it anymore!
I LOVE THIS STORY!
If it wasn't for the fact that I'm currently sick, then I would be jumping around the room in excitement right now!
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July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMGeezus that was so awesome just when you don't think you can read anything good somethng great comes along I think this fic is by far my most favorite story in the whole wide world I finished reading it weeks ago and I'm still thinking about it. I just love how grown up you write for Naruto it's different than what other people do and I love it he's so much more attractive that way now I'd love reading a sequel to this it had everyhting the action the suspense the erotica haha it was so good I wish I could erase my memory and do it all over again I love how much depth you put in your stories even the little ones it's very impressive I love to follow the emotions of a story and you've got it that was the best you rock don't stop doing what your doing because it can only get better! Yaaaayy!!!
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January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
as a new year treat to myself, I re-read this story again(not that I havn't brfore!)
as always, it blows me away and is one of my favorite stories ever:)
thanks again for this.
as always, it blows me away and is one of my favorite stories ever:)
thanks again for this.
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August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Incredibly good story. Thank you, Zrina!
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July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You almost killed me...I liked your story, enjoyed it, understood it and lost sleep because of it. Wonderful play of emotions. good job
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June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
not a good thing to go and read such wonderful fic and not review!
so sorry, it took me awhile..
i've been following this story since the beginning and, well, certain circumstances happened and i kinda lost my link to most of the stories that i've been reading here in aff..
anyhoo, you don't need me to gush about how good this story is.
i mean, you'd probably received a lot of that..
but m'stubborn like that so lemme say it.. THIS IS SUCH A GOOD STORY!
not just because of the NaruSasu smut (ok, mostly it's because of that) but i like how you played the plot..
very 'crime and suspense'-ish, very axn. ;p
plus, add the fact that this is not your usual Orochimaru story.
y'know, where he's always been a Sasuke-molesting character..
i like how you made it that it's Naruto who has a broken past and yet he's not some weepy, weakling uke-type.
ooh, and that scene where he got (opposite) raped by Orochimaru.. that was a good one.
we don't get a lot of that here and it's relaly nice when you read stories that (kinda) share your own sentiments..
so, yay for you and your NaruSasu fics!
'hope you write more. :)
so sorry, it took me awhile..
i've been following this story since the beginning and, well, certain circumstances happened and i kinda lost my link to most of the stories that i've been reading here in aff..
anyhoo, you don't need me to gush about how good this story is.
i mean, you'd probably received a lot of that..
but m'stubborn like that so lemme say it.. THIS IS SUCH A GOOD STORY!
not just because of the NaruSasu smut (ok, mostly it's because of that) but i like how you played the plot..
very 'crime and suspense'-ish, very axn. ;p
plus, add the fact that this is not your usual Orochimaru story.
y'know, where he's always been a Sasuke-molesting character..
i like how you made it that it's Naruto who has a broken past and yet he's not some weepy, weakling uke-type.
ooh, and that scene where he got (opposite) raped by Orochimaru.. that was a good one.
we don't get a lot of that here and it's relaly nice when you read stories that (kinda) share your own sentiments..
so, yay for you and your NaruSasu fics!
'hope you write more. :)
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June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wouldn't you know..
this story was completed a year after it was published.
may 7 is the anniversary.
how cool is that?! ;p
this story was completed a year after it was published.
may 7 is the anniversary.
how cool is that?! ;p
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June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are an awesome author and you deserve two giant thumbs up!!! I read some of your oneshots and didn't have time to review. I love everything that I have read so far! Keep up the good work and thanks for a great story.
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May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great job! You made the story believable and in character. This is smutacular but never PWP. You rock hard my friend!!
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May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I almost cried. You--you--you--are amazing. *makes a noise like a dying bird* Wow.